Chasing Fireflies - Comments

Hahaha. Those boys are silly.
But I can't get enough. (;
Wow, they both have some unique first memories of each other. Haha.

And I'm so sorry about your great-aunt, love.
<3

I can only imagine if John ever made Garrett eat salt like that. Hah!
Update soon? :]

<3 Hope she feels better.
Miracles can happen.

And cannot wait for you to come back.
It can only mean more Care Bears. XD

Dude.
I love Care Bears.
Don't diss Care Bears.
Can I have Kenny just because of that?
That's adorable. haha.
Update?

Oh wow... that was fast. I love how you kept the banter of conversation going throughout the chapter, it kept the flow going. I think my favourite part would have been when John made Garrett eat salt. That was just priceless. I also love how Laurel just has this sisterly vibe with them, it brings out all of these great moments in your chapters.

Haha, yes I approve! I love how you introduced the new characters without it sounding rushed or anything. I loved the whole Care Bears mockery scene. I also like how you're pacing this, you're not rushing a relationship between Laurel and Pat... there's actually substance. Frankly, I just love the story, haha.

Pshaw. Yes, I approve. [:
I love the first stages of relationships. c:
It's adorable. Haha.
...And Kenny brought his Caaare Beaaars. xD
Hahaha. :D

I APPROVE.
I'm digging all the carebears. :)
And Pat and Laurel. They're so amazing for one another.
I love this story. Updatteeee???

I approve because there was talk about the Care Bears. :]

I APPROVE.

And I succeeded. :)

PS: CARE. FORKIN'. BEARS. <3

I really like this!
I can tell it's going to be fun to read...
...so I'm subscribing!
more soon please?

I liked this one a lot better. (:
Ahaha. Yay, Care Bears! xD
I forreal want a book like that. Haha.

I love the new version and layout and word count more than you.
And that's saying a lot. <3
DO NOT DARE LEAVE OUT THE CARE BEARS. ;)

I love both versions of this story!
YESSSS! THE CARE BEARS! haha!
And I do love this layout. :]
Update soon?

I love Pat and Laurel and how you're slowly shaping their personalities. You do have a few typing errors, but it is a beautiful introduction to what I think will be quite a ride. <3

And we love you. <3

Laurel and Pat need to bang. Just sayin' :)

I was sold for this story when I found out Pat was in it.
But the care bars just took it to a whole knew level man.
<3

I have a feeling the Care Bear thing will be mentioned many times in this story. HAH!

I LOVE THIS.

Chapter 1:
I want a book like that. Hahaha. Kind of...
AW! Kenny brought his Care Bears! xD That's adorable in a weird/sweet kind of way.
So, one chapter in and not much has happened but I'm already jealous of Laurel...Getting to go on a road trip with all those fine boys. Haha.

Chapter 2:
I love Wendy's. c:
Haha. Aw. That's what Kenny gets for teasing them...He's never gonna live it down. xD
They're adorable already. Haha. (: