Lack of Color. - Comments

  • Rae M Wakefield

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    I cried! but the ending confused me o_o could you clear that up?? :)

    I LOVE this.
    July 5th, 2011 at 01:43am
  • codiodi1

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    like everyone else, im confused!

    who dieddd?!

    i still liked it tho!
    January 17th, 2011 at 05:27am
  • bitter.love

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    Wait... Who died? I really need to know, i'm kinda confused D:
    January 15th, 2011 at 04:47am
  • omglee!

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    Loved this story! Your amazing at writing :)
    But who died at the end? Im so confused.
    December 4th, 2010 at 04:49am
  • AlyBallyBee

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    Loved the whole story!
    But I'm confused about who died though??
    November 16th, 2010 at 08:50pm
  • erika_xtc

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    I'm kind of confused. Is she or is she not dead? Are they both dead for that matter?
    November 16th, 2010 at 05:07am
  • feel_alive

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    sooooooooo friggin happy she didnt die. GREAT ENDING. GREAT STORY. just great.
    November 16th, 2010 at 03:48am
  • Jackalack

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    Wait. The ending confused me so she didn't die and some random person did? I'm so lostt
    November 16th, 2010 at 02:43am
  • feel_alive

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    please don't let her really be dead! that would be horrible! poor John ugh good story though.
    November 15th, 2010 at 10:47pm
  • drea_uhoh

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    D:
    that's sooo sad! ugh
    mkay, i love it, and i can't believe their are only a few chapters left.
    Don't let her die! or anything! i love irony, but i don't think i would for this.
    November 11th, 2010 at 06:48pm
  • xx_alesanafan_xx

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    I cried :'(
    November 11th, 2010 at 06:27pm
  • xx_alesanafan_xx

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    AAAAAHHHH
    November 11th, 2010 at 06:27pm
  • xx_alesanafan_xx

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    AAAAAHHHH
    November 11th, 2010 at 06:27pm
  • drea_uhoh

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    i honestly love this story :3
    john needs to get back home tho D:
    more soon?
    November 10th, 2010 at 03:55am
  • brucepayne

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    Oh gosh everything's gone a bit pearshaped ):
    Poor John. Silly Erin. Poor Erin.
    Wonderful update. As usual (:
    November 2nd, 2010 at 08:27am
  • la dispute.

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    Gah. Erin and John are in such a sticky relationship.
    I also hate that she's turned to drugs. Specifically, coke.
    It's such an ugly and damaging drug.
    I really hope that John or her brothers discover her secret.
    I know it'll create a shit load of drama for her, but it could also possibly save her.
    And my heart aches for John. Poor boy. ):
    October 31st, 2010 at 06:27am
  • KimbuhleeSmiles

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    OH. MY. GOD. I love this story. Please keep updating!
    October 31st, 2010 at 02:06am
  • brucepayne

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    Brilliant update as usual. (:
    She wouldn't look in his eyes and he loves her. I can sense some drama.
    October 31st, 2010 at 01:23am
  • xx_alesanafan_xx

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    I adore this!
    It sucks that she turned to drugs :(
    She needs to stay with John.
    October 26th, 2010 at 11:49am
  • brucepayne

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    Awesome update.
    My brother was a drug addict and it was the scariest thing ever. He ended up on the streets, so ill looking. He was way to skinny and his teeth were horrible and I swear he looked like he'd die any minute.
    October 26th, 2010 at 11:34am