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  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! Great job with it! Hm... ooohh... so I wonder what the results of the test results will be? It's going to bother me until you finally tell us, lol, I already know that for a fact. :P Hm... and I loved how Kissy told Addison to just go ahead and tell Joe that she loves him, because Kissy is right... Addison shouldn't let her old relationship with Kyle hold her back. I like the easy flow of conversations you're able to create; they're actually like something I'd hear people in real life say instead of the typical fictionalized conversations I typically hear in stories. Your's has a more natural flow to it instead of being cliche. Hopefully that makes sense, and it is a compliment, because that's just showing how unique your story is compared to others. It's definitely original. :) Hm... oh, and don't say that! I love the new layout; I love all your new layout designs. They're way better than what I can create, lol. :P
    Overall, amazing update, like always. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
    January 21st, 2011 at 05:07am
  • JJonas_CQuiseng

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    Awesome update, as always :)
    I'm thinking the two girls that won the contest are the ones who leaked the info...
    I like the new layout :)
    UPDATE SUPER SOON PLEASE!!
    January 21st, 2011 at 02:11am
  • MindlessDreaming

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    This was really good :)
    update soon please :)
    January 21st, 2011 at 01:53am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! :D Great job with it, like always. :D
    Hm... I like how you're able to write it Addison and like, make her be the person instead of the people who were involved in real life. Like, Joe wrote that song about Camilla, I believe (or that was the rumor, anyway), and then Nick with the duet... like, you put Addison there instead, and I like how you were able to do that. The second example may not count, seeing as he may still choose Miley, but hopefully you get my point. lol. And aw, that Kyle guy is a jerk for doing that to Addison! Now he has her scared of telling someone she loves him since he laughed in her face. :( And uh-oh... he showed up at the end of the chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next with that.
    Once again, great update! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
    January 11th, 2011 at 09:53pm
  • fiction tears;

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    YAY You updated!!
    Loved it xDD
    Hoping for more!
    January 9th, 2011 at 05:58pm
  • JJonas_CQuiseng

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    Awesome update!
    I love the song Much Better.
    Wonder what's gonna happen with Kyle...
    Update super soon please!!
    January 7th, 2011 at 05:26am
  • troubled thoughts;

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    I just read this story again after a week!
    And I loved the update again!! :)

    Update soon, please? :D
    January 2nd, 2011 at 04:31am
  • fiction tears;

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    WOW>
    I have been constantly waiting for an update.
    I am like sneaking in to the computer for the updates.
    Dont tell my mom, okay?
    SO MUCH DEDICATION FOR THIS STORY! xDD
    December 28th, 2010 at 04:51pm
  • skinny love.

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    I'm only on the first chapter of this, but I dislike the Taylor Swift thing.
    I know it's just for a story, but just the way she'd portrayed, it's eh.
    I'd rather see that be Camilla Belle because she really is a bitch.

    BUTTTTTTT, I love this story so far, soo keep it up, hun.
    I hope you didn't think my comment was mean, lol. I just adore Taylor Swift too much.
    >.<
    December 26th, 2010 at 07:23pm
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! So... it seems as if me and Mashi are scheming, huh? Way to make us the bad guys. lol. Jk. I'm just kidding; I'm greatful that you put me in the story at all. lol. So... just kidding. :P Hm... but so if our character's are done, does that mean... they don't go through with it? Or we do, but we just... won't be in it? I think I get what you mean, lol. You don't have to answer.
    And hm... so Addison could possibly not be her father's, but her uncle may actually be her father. Whoa. Way to stir up drama. I wonder if he actually is, by the way you described him, I have a feeling... that he may be. :o But I like the aspect that Addison is going to keep her father, her father no matter what... even if he isn't hers biologically. :)
    Overall, another amazing update! I didn't think it was bad at all. :) Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
    December 25th, 2010 at 05:25am
  • JJonas_CQuiseng

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    Awesome update :)
    Well hey now we know who her possible birth father could be.
    I wonder if her dad is biologically her dad...
    Cute chapter.
    Update super soon please!!
    December 25th, 2010 at 02:14am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! :) Funny when Mashi and I saw Joe and Addison making out. Or wait... is that how I should refer to our characters? I guess, lol, I'll just say that. But oh my goodness... so wait... Addison's father... may not be her father? :o Because he never answered her... :o But you know what? If that is true, and he knew this whole time... he is an awfully sweet man, for raising Addison if she wasn't even his. But can't wait to find out the truth behind that. Overall, amazing update, like always. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
    December 14th, 2010 at 10:56pm
  • troubled thoughts;

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    Awesome!
    And now, I'm in love with this story :D Can't wait for the next chapter :)
    December 13th, 2010 at 01:08pm
  • fiction tears;

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    Awesome.
    This story seems to make my day C:
    December 13th, 2010 at 09:48am
  • MindlessDreaming

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    Great update. I really like your writing. You're pretty good.
    I can't wait for the next chapter :)
    December 13th, 2010 at 04:40am
  • JJonas_CQuiseng

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    Awesome update :)
    I thought it was funny that Joe && Addison were hiding the fact that they were more than best friends, I loved it.
    Wonder if Addisons father is her biological father...?
    Update super soon please!!
    December 13th, 2010 at 03:16am
  • abz

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    i love this story!!! great job so far!!!
    December 12th, 2010 at 08:30pm
  • MindlessDreaming

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    Wow, this is pretty good. I mean pretty good.
    This is definitely one of my favorite stories, and believe me, I've read a lot.
    Please update soon :) I really love this.
    December 12th, 2010 at 04:04am
  • Nanook

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    AWWWWW.... you're too awesome! lol. Seriously, I was not expecting that! :) That seriously made my day; the cameo appearance! And you made me friends with Mashi, another girl I happen to talk with on her, so she is my friend. :D Thank you, thank you, thank you, I seriously can't thank you enough for doing that. That just brought up my boring week. lol. That's probably the first time I've met them, story wise and reality wise, seeing as I've never met them in real life. lol. But anyways, you are truly awesome, and now... I must think of a way to repay you. I'll think of something. ;P
    As for the rest of the chapter... so... Addison and Joe went to go see her mom. And it didn't go so well. Poor Addison, her mother is just... what Joe said. A b-word! lol. Poor girl, I don't blame her for being upset afterwards. But I'm glad Jow was able to lift her spirit a little. :) Overall, AMAZING update! Can't wait for more! :D
    December 10th, 2010 at 03:25am
  • troubled thoughts;

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    I just found this story and loved all the updates :)
    I love it how Joe can be so sweet in this story.
    Can't wait for more chapter. Update soon!! :)
    December 9th, 2010 at 12:12pm