In the Rose Garden - Comments

The second chapter is an awesome way to show Addison and her dad's relationship!
I love this, and I know, this will be huge!!
:* I SO LOVE IT!

really cool keep going please.

love much!! update soon

I like this..I wanna see where you take it so keep on writing girl lol. and omg taylor swift is a bizatch! Joe needs to drop the hoe stat! lol.

Hmmm I have to say i love it!! :D

Hm... I'm liking this. Loving it actually, even though you only have a chapter of it posted. :) Aw, it's sad that her mom acts like that, but at least her dad is better. :) Haha, and I thought it was funny how you made Taylor all mean. I could picture her being like that. Overall, great beginning, and I hope that you decide to continue this on here. :) And look, three other people like it as well ^, so I think you should keep it on here. :) Can't wait for the next update, if you decide to post it. :D
Definitely... Already... Subscribed! :D

I love this! I hope you decide to keep it on mibba! : )

I could see Taylor Swift acting exactly like this. But just like Addison I can't stop listening to her music! Anyway constructive criticism... I am bad at this... I like how Joe didn't talk yet I knew that he felt terrible about how Taylor was acting. I know this is just the first chapter but I think the relationship with her mom need to be played up more. Oh and I don't know why she doesn't just live with her dad if her mom is like that...? But I loved it! And if you do decided to put it on JBFA I am there to so it doesn't matter! :)
Amanda
P.S. I am pretty impressed with my constructive criticism!

Wow!
I liked what I read so far :)
I expect more too!
LOVE IT AND SUBBING IT!