September 11th, 2010 at 09:25am
In the Rose Garden - Comments
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really cool keep going please.September 11th, 2010 at 02:43am
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love much!! update soonSeptember 2nd, 2010 at 05:11pm
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I like this..I wanna see where you take it so keep on writing girl lol. and omg taylor swift is a bizatch! Joe needs to drop the hoe stat! lol.August 27th, 2010 at 09:58pm
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Hmmm I have to say i love it!! :DAugust 25th, 2010 at 07:09am
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Hm... I'm liking this. Loving it actually, even though you only have a chapter of it posted. :) Aw, it's sad that her mom acts like that, but at least her dad is better. :) Haha, and I thought it was funny how you made Taylor all mean. I could picture her being like that. Overall, great beginning, and I hope that you decide to continue this on here. :) And look, three other people like it as well ^, so I think you should keep it on here. :) Can't wait for the next update, if you decide to post it. :D
Definitely... Already... Subscribed! :DAugust 25th, 2010 at 06:34am -
I love this! I hope you decide to keep it on mibba! : )August 25th, 2010 at 01:55am
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I could see Taylor Swift acting exactly like this. But just like Addison I can't stop listening to her music! Anyway constructive criticism... I am bad at this... I like how Joe didn't talk yet I knew that he felt terrible about how Taylor was acting. I know this is just the first chapter but I think the relationship with her mom need to be played up more. Oh and I don't know why she doesn't just live with her dad if her mom is like that...? But I loved it! And if you do decided to put it on JBFA I am there to so it doesn't matter! :)
Amanda
P.S. I am pretty impressed with my constructive criticism!August 25th, 2010 at 01:17am -
Wow!
I liked what I read so far :)
I expect more too!
LOVE IT AND SUBBING IT!August 25th, 2010 at 01:15am
I love this, and I know, this will be huge!!
:* I SO LOVE IT!