*Cassadee That's the one thing that irked me the whole chapter. I hate it when peoples names are spelt wrong XD Pretty good apart from that though. But I don't like Vinny being the bad guy, he's awesome!
omnomnomnomnom val better go! i mean its so obvious! jack and alex were made for eachother! i mean come on! who doesn't know that! update soon please x
Ahh! This is really freaking amazing! I love both of you <3 but, and I dont mean this offensively, but I have spotted some spelling/grammar mistakes, so I was wondering if you guys would want me to pre-read the chapters before you post them and edit them, if you would like? I really love you both, even though I've never met you Emily <3 again, just a suggestion ;) write more?! XxX
Anywhooo, this is really good guys (: