Won't Turn Out Right - Comments

  • xxbrittxxx

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    This was interesting... are they going to try to push her over the edge and turn into people like themselves? will she be strong enough to resist if so? and aside from not feeding or showering wth do they plan on doing with her or to her? I thought this chapter was actually a little funny i laughed at the beginning but then it left me with all these questions! so i need another update :D
    September 21st, 2010 at 10:21am
  • Issues

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    I love zacky.
    Aweosome chapter.
    Please update soon.
    September 20th, 2010 at 12:52pm
  • bamftastic;

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    I actually threw up my hands and screamed YES when you quoted the Joker. Thank you. xD

    I enjoy this and where this may be going. Ha.
    September 20th, 2010 at 02:25am
  • MyMonkeySaidSo

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    I honestly love this. It had me laughing and wanting to read more. So update please????
    September 13th, 2010 at 01:56am
  • xxbrittxxx

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    HaHa loved the update .. the banter between her and Vengeance was so freakin funny. Hmmm Matt likes her - was that sort of a hint.. Maybe they plan to take her with them? I dont know but i cant wait to find out! I shall be eagerly awaiting next Sundays update which sadly seems sooooo far away. :(
    September 12th, 2010 at 11:44pm
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    I'll give her a hug!!
    I wanna hug Johnny too.
    I loved the chapter.
    Please update soon.
    September 12th, 2010 at 10:31pm
  • NightmareOfVengeance

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    I need more! please update soon!!!!

    ahahaha he was still passed out from the vase. and sunday is waaaaaaaay to faaar!!! :(
    September 12th, 2010 at 09:08pm
  • xxbrittxxx

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    HaHaHa she hit him with the vase Score! lololol hmmmhmm now theyv got her *and* the combo... what next? i really like this story and i cant wait for the next update. Why does next Sunday seem so far away? *pouts* a week is like soooooo long. :D
    September 5th, 2010 at 10:19pm
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    I loved the chapter, it was amazing.
    I loved the part where she threw the vace.
    Please update soon.
    September 5th, 2010 at 09:51pm
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    I really like this story so far.
    Your plotline so far is amazing.
    Please update soon.
    September 4th, 2010 at 01:54am
  • xxbrittxxx

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    Woah i'm the first commenter ... cool! LoL WOW this story is great. it like gave me butterflies it was so exciting ... my eyes were glued to the screen i dont know if i even blinked. a7x? robbery? violence? AWESOME. My personal fav is Shadows .. all that angry maleness *yum* okay rambling sorry! but i will be dying until i read the next update! so please do soon :D
    September 2nd, 2010 at 04:52am