Agh, sorry I can't be bothered to write a long comment right now. I liked the beginning of the chapter though; the rest was a bit fillerish. Update when you can! <3
I really like your story because it has subtlety with it's sexual momments. Your male POV is damn near spot on. I see a lot of female writers that forget how guys actually act when they move to the male point of view. Please continue^_^
I REALLY like the story so far; SUBBED (: Ian and Kia's characters are really amusing! I hope you're back to writing for good :D Update when you can! <3
zomg FINALLY you update!!! what took so long? i hate jess for coming in a ruining everything... there's something really fishy about her..... not cool..... i love the story tho :D
i love the story haha the pool part was really good stupid jess has to come and ruin it! hey you know.. i think Jess is jealous that kia is so close with ian.... and she's surprisingly always there when something "interesting" :P is going to happen between the two... and on top of that she left her with that dave or watever guy... being a friend arent they supposed to get out of the "buy me a drink" trap? why did she ditch her there... lols..... there's something fishy with jess..
hey i just got that update email for you story (yayy) and I went to read it and it wont let me in to the chapter.... I don't know if this is just MY computer or what... But I've been waiting for this update for a while so I'm a bit disapointed... :/
I love this story =D. I've spent the last three hours reading this nonstop and I loved it. Then I looked at the last time it was updated and got sad because it's been so long =(. I can't wait for a new update.
Ian and Kia's game is funny, it really made me laugh when they first started the game. =P