Absolutely awesome. When you finish, you should so do a sequel!! Love how all the guys are so hot, (six packs, YUM) and love the sticker/ribbon game + water gun fight. Update really soon please!! We're all waiting for more amazing updates! *Subscribe* PS: Awesome grammar and plot, loving it!
I dont know why I hadnt commented before... But I am now. :P This story...makes me so deliciously frustrated... I would have lost the game so long ago it isnt even funnny
I really like this and I love Ian and Kia they're really cute together....loved the pool scene but hate Jess for ruining the moment again lol....anyways update soon plz xoxo
Good story. :) I love the stubbornness of Kia. It reminds me of myself. Which makes me love this story on a much more of a personal level. Thank you for that :) Just enjoy writing this and you will go far! --Sammy :)