Sucks to be You. - Comments

This is really funny and fantastically cliché. Too bad we'll never get to know what he was going to make her do but despite everything, this was a good read

Oh, I love this! It's a funny storyline, I loved it when Sky was annoyed at Louisa when she recognised the Sour Cherry song being on Gossip Girl xD
I really love the contrast between the two characters and how they are managing to survive a night in the library ;) good stuff!
*subscribes*

....HOW did I not know you wrote this?
Yes, i've been stalking your stories, now HUSH.
WHY HAS THIS NOT BEEN UPDATED SINCE BEFORE CHRISTMAS?!!!
If i said my bithday was tomorrow, would you update?
I mean, it's NOT, but would you?
*massive, slightly creepy, grin*

oh my gosh.
i love your louisa and sky. louisa's reactions and skys comments are hilarious.
haha, i laughed at the bucket and the hand sanitser thing. my friend actually had to go through a moment like that hahaa.
so looking for moooooore.
oh, and i am totally subscribing. :)

Great start. You're a great writer. Hilarious!

bahahahahahaha "close the lid when your done" put me into hysterics, but i grinned madly when i read the line "i just had a vision of Louisa Bateman giving me a blow job" lol getting that from wanting to give her a lollipop is hi-fucking-larious.... :) what a funny bugger he is lol and of coarse she has the perfect legs. I mean, she's Louisa Bateman, she isn't the cheer leading captain for nothing you know... :) POST AGAIN POST AGAIN *squeals like little 5 year old* AGAIN AGAIN AGAIN!!!

hahaha no she isn't an open book *shifty eyes* its just me *nodds vigorously* but i guess the panic attack made me laugh since it was over the time basically "oh no, oh no, oh no. It's 5:41" hahaha i was snickering as well, so if your weird, im weird lol but im weird anyways so it doesn't really count :)

I wonder what else you have in store for little miss princess and Emo guy....hmmm?? lol post again soon....this is my new addiction!! I just hope that backstabbing Judas gets whats coming to her, perhaps with a little help from the ever so humble Emo Sky =D I wonder....

heh heh heh... that was kinda funny.

Didn't Louisa's friend say that Craig got poned in English....? I GET IT! :)
Good story btw.

Great chapter, and while I was reading the part about Greg? I was texting my friend Greg. I found it ironic.

I really like this so far. Keep it up, can't wait to see what happens next.

hahaha fuck this made me laugh that line "some kid even went eeYEAH" hahaha what the hell? good, i cannot believe he would openly make comments like that, i frowned everytime someone would say comments like that at my school before i graduated!! Like what the hell? Where's the respect? and those racist comments, although they made me laugh, it is wrong...but to loudly say it where people can hear you?? that's down right disrespectful!! Least everyone else wasnt laughing with him except for his airheaded dickfriends!!

Suuuup.
The last two chapters were wicked cool, I love how Sky just went and full on whacked Greg/Craig? in the face. Good stuff :)
And I've read Of Mice and Men...I had to read it for Lit back in Year 11. Everyone used to complain about it being boring but I didn't actually mind it, I read it twice when everyone else just barely managed to get through it :)

her situation does suck, but there is always going to be someone who comes from underneath trying to pull the rug out from under the popular person, wanting the respect that everyone gives. I guess she's gonna miss cheer practice huh, and people are going to think she's ditched and the cheating whore won...but least in the end she gets the guy, right? lol

I love all your stories, it's no surprise I'm commenting on this one too aha.
Sky is cool...I like the sarcastic kind of characters, they crack me up :)

Update please?

it has an very interesting begining i would like to read more