With One Accord - Comments

leavingggggggg (100)

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Aliyah, I love this. I can't believe you only have two comments. It was so perfectly executed and so strongly written, and the layout is beautiful, especially the banner. I did spot one thing, though.

"Your lips taste like, vomit," Eames chuckles.

No comma after like. :)

In conclusion, your writing is more beautiful than NATALIE PORTMAN.

February 28th, 2011 at 02:11pm

sweet clementine. (100)

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One comment?

Wow.

/applause.

/applause

/APPLAUSE.

Wow, Aliyah, this was amazing amazing amazing.

That silk tea can really whip up a banner, wow!

It went with the story well, too.

Good job, 10/10.

November 27th, 2010 at 03:07am

the fallen. (100)

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I LOVED IT.
Don't know why no one commented.
I loved it how he kisses him even though he has vomit.
THAT'S love.

Great job, like always.

November 1st, 2010 at 10:46pm