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  • autumnfreakshow

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    YAY! She picked Brian, she picked Brian *does happy dace* as you can see I am quite happy. ;]
    Woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo! Poor Zacky though.
    But he will find happiness eventually.
    But yes Kia, Brian and Savannah are now a happy family!

    Great job with this story :D
    I seriously loved it, and I can't for the epilogue!
    June 4th, 2011 at 12:47pm
  • Haylie Jaed

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    ...it's finished!? D= I didn't see that coming! Really, I forgot it had to end at all. But I quite like the way it did. There's room left to imagine a whole lot more, and that's always a good thing - almost like it hasn't ended at all!

    I loved this story, and I'll be waiting on the epilogue. =) Good luck with your exams!

    xoxo
    HJ.
    June 4th, 2011 at 11:07am
  • hachie

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    Wow I was right!
    I believed that Kia would choose Brian because she still loves so much and that they have a beautiful daughter together.
    And Zacky is her best friend, someone that she could confide even though Zacky he wanted to become more than best friends with Kia.
    LOL I bet Brian was completely thrown off when Kia came by and told him that she told Zacky that she couldn't start a relationship him since someone else has had her heart already.
    And Brian thought that Kia made the decision to go to France!!!! X3
    Now that Kia is giving Brian another chance to be a true family, he knows now that he can't mess up or he'll definitely lose Kia again!
    I am happy that Kia and Brian are together again, so Brian better not mess up again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! X3
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST THE EPILOGUE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 4th, 2011 at 09:34am
  • Unique;

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    aaaaaaaawh, :')
    June 4th, 2011 at 06:38am
  • angy_something

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    Awwwww I loved it.
    I like your new username Its kewl
    Love ya
    Can't wait for the epilogue
    June 4th, 2011 at 06:27am
  • Kalypso

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    Awh yay! I'm sad to see this end but happy that Kia decided :)
    June 4th, 2011 at 04:29am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Did she pick brian??? I cant wait for the next one :)
    May 30th, 2011 at 11:29pm
  • VampGirl4eva

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    CHOOSE BRIAN!!!
    May 30th, 2011 at 02:11am
  • Haylie Jaed

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    Well, that doesn't really clarify anything. But I hope she choses Brian, just because it would be the right thing for Savannah. And because Kia still loves him anyway, right? But poor Zacky would be heartbroken. =/

    Gahhhhhh, I don't know!

    xoxo
    HJ.
    May 29th, 2011 at 12:00pm
  • autumnfreakshow

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    So she finally choosed?
    Hmm wonder who?
    Haha poor Savannah being used as her daddy's spy.
    Though don't most parents do that with their kids? XD
    Haha and their was ice cream in the mix, so kids+ice cream= total oblivious to what is going on around them! ;]

    Great update :D
    I loved it and I am going to be sad to see it go.
    May 29th, 2011 at 11:48am
  • Sweet...Whisper

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    Oh snap, the end!?! It's an awesome story, I just wanna know who Kia chooses!!
    May 29th, 2011 at 08:04am
  • angy_something

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    Oh my Oh my Oh my. I can't wait to read the decision chappy
    I'm not dissapointed with this story because I love it and it is greeeat. But I do want a sequel soooo I'll be waiting for it
    Love ya
    May 29th, 2011 at 01:44am
  • Dezi Demize

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    Chapter 27: I have this really strong feeling that Kia is gonna choose Zacky, but I'm kinda hoping she picks Brian!!!
    Update soon<333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
    May 29th, 2011 at 12:43am
  • thatcrackfox

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    Aah, cliffhangers :') I hate to love them! Savannah is actually adorable, she's so oblivious to what's going on with her parents, bless her ^^ I love how Brian's using her for information aswell; I would if it was me in that situation aha is there seriously only going to be a few more chapters left? :o I'll miss it tho! Make things work out okay for everyone in the end, & it'll be okay :L a joke ofc, end it however you want XD
    May 28th, 2011 at 10:48pm
  • hachie

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    Wow so this story is coming to an end?
    Just like three chapters left??????
    Aw I am going to miss this story so much because I love everything about this story.
    So Kia has made her decision about who she is going to pick.
    I am so excited right now because Brian finally maned up and ended things with Michelle, now he has to wait on what Kia has decided.
    Aw Savannah is like Brian's little spy, she really doesn't know she is giving her dad info on what is going on with Kia when he is not around.
    I think I may have a feeling who she is going to pick.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 28th, 2011 at 07:58pm
  • Synyster's_Vengeance

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    This story is awesome! Just read it from start to current chapter and I love it! Hope to see who Kia chooses soon! x
    May 24th, 2011 at 09:33am
  • thatcrackfox

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    oh, I feel for her so much :') although it's totally her fault! she should never have let things get this out of hand ^^ I just hope it all works out for her & Savannah in the end, and that she's atleast happy. Like I said before though, Brian needs to man the **** up and try harder to get her back! Also, Kia needs to stop being a cowardly bitch (: ah, I'm getting so attached to this story ^_^
    May 22nd, 2011 at 04:05pm
  • autumnfreakshow

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    Im curious to see who she picks ;]
    Mm me hope its Brian, but if its Zacky I don't mind either haha.
    I think any kid who has a week of from school would be happy XD

    Great update~
    I enjoyed it :]
    May 22nd, 2011 at 03:57am
  • VampGirl4eva

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    CHOOSE BRIAN!!!
    May 22nd, 2011 at 02:57am
  • Haylie Jaed

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    "brians an ass, zacky is an ass, she should just go hook up with johnny depp and forget them."

    Sorry, I just saw that, and it made me LOL so hard! XD
    May 22nd, 2011 at 01:05am
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