This is really good and I just love the story line! But there are some missing bits of punctuation which makes it slightly difficult to read at times. I can over come these with ease but others, maybe someone who doesn't speak English as their first language, could find it far more difficult. Nobody's perfect but you could always get someone to proofread your work just to check. I really do love this story and can't wait to continue! <3
November 27th, 2010 at 11:11pm
