As promised :) I really liked how you inccorparated the theme of the quote you could say in to the story as well as the quote itself. It was also really cute how once he woke up you realized it was a dream and then the light banter at the end was also nice. It was a really nice story over all and i really liked it. I don't know if my co-author/contest maker person will comment since i haven't talked to her in a bit. I'll also PM you about the prizes and stuff :)
I really liked how you inccorparated the theme of the quote you could say in to the story as well as the quote itself.
It was also really cute how once he woke up you realized it was a dream and then the light banter at the end was also nice.
It was a really nice story over all and i really liked it.
I don't know if my co-author/contest maker person will comment since i haven't talked to her in a bit.
I'll also PM you about the prizes and stuff :)