These Lines Were Never Established - Comments

  • Guns and Alex

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    Ah!
    I want her not to be mad at daddy anymore!
    Sad face!

    As for falling on dead ears!
    Resolve the issue and give us an update!
    You are killing me here!
    November 30th, 2010 at 01:54pm
  • teenagedream91

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    This just gets cuter and cuter. i love how she is attached to Travis even though before she wanted nothing to do with him. That's kids for ya. Those boys are so mean taking Tito away from her, getting smacked upside the head does you do good. I got those plenty of times. lol I think a long family argument would work it seems to me that Juan is the type who doesn't give up. Her family seems too stubborn to even let her do whatever she wants. :)
    November 30th, 2010 at 06:53am
  • a7x babe56

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    we should definetly go for A and i love this story vsnt wait for the next update
    November 30th, 2010 at 04:28am
  • JayCaffrey

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    Awesome pastrana story(:
    November 30th, 2010 at 01:08am
  • GoGirlGo

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    I love this story! It's so well written and the topic is not one you usually see, it's very interesting! Can't wait for an update!
    November 26th, 2010 at 03:08am
  • teenagedream91

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    Awww how more adorable can she get?! I love how she loves Tiny more than anything and so attached to the dog. :) I can't wait for the next one. Keep it up girl.
    November 25th, 2010 at 05:14am
  • teenagedream91

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    It's so cute that she follows Robert around. I still feel bad for Travis since he's still gettin the silent treatment from Hayley. I can't wait for the next chapter. Also it made me laugh when Travis mimicked his mother and she pinched him lol classic
    November 19th, 2010 at 08:02am
  • Jamie Glynn;

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    take your time on 'Falling On Deaf Ears' this one is just as good.
    November 12th, 2010 at 08:02pm
  • teenagedream91

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    That was a long chapter. I was surprised how long it was. Travis makes a great father and I laughed when he flipped the boys off and looked back to make sure Hayley didn't see. Haha. It was gutting to see that Hayley kept ignoring Travis. Ashlee seems so nice and loving. So sad. I can't wait to read the next chapter and hopefully you will overcome that writers block for falling on deaf ears. :)
    November 12th, 2010 at 07:01pm
  • Guns and Alex

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    I usually dont read PG13 stories cuz...I am prejudice like that...but hot gamn is this awesome!
    I love it!
    November 12th, 2010 at 08:41am
  • teenagedream91

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    Wow someone reported you? I don't see anything wrong with your story. Anyways I love the chapter. It was perfect the way she reacted it would have been too easy if Hayley accepted him right after he told her he's her father. Anyway child would have been mad. Kudos to you my friend. I can't wait for the next chapter.
    November 9th, 2010 at 03:02am
  • justcallmescully

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    Can't wait for the next chapter!=)
    November 8th, 2010 at 11:03pm
  • kirkupk

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    awh, i loooove it. please write more soon. :)
    sooo cutee, <3<3xx.
    November 8th, 2010 at 10:56pm
  • teenagedream91

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    Awww what a cute chapter especially the end. Finally thu found her and it sounds pretty bad. Can't wait for the next chapter
    November 2nd, 2010 at 02:18am
  • teenagedream91

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    Awww I just keep sqealing about Hailey. She's so cute and I love how u are detailed with haileys views it's so great. I love one of th best TP stories I've read so far
    October 31st, 2010 at 12:24am
  • Charlie..

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    Awwwwww!!!!
    I can't even form any intelectual words to comment on this story.
    Just awwwww!
    October 29th, 2010 at 04:26am
  • Candyz

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    WRITE MORE PLEASE
    October 29th, 2010 at 01:52am
  • allysaurus

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    pretty sure everytime this story is updated i'm always like YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 26th, 2010 at 01:30am
  • teenagedream91

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    Awww that was so adorable! I just can't help but squeal with i read about Hayley she is just too cute. I know i say it every time but it's true. Great job on the chapter.
    October 13th, 2010 at 04:12am
  • teenagedream91

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    That is my favorite chapter. It was so hilarious. lol Her imagination is so wild! She thinks she was going to be soup and running all over the house causing a rukus. lol I just love her and her badassness. lol Can't wait for the next chapter. Also love how Travis feel uncomfortable giving Hayley a bath, how he feels like a pedophile. lol
    October 9th, 2010 at 05:44am