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  • teenagedream91

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    He doesn't want to take a bath? I love that scene it was funny the arguemen whether or not she takes one. Travis doesn't know to give her a bath? That's original. I love this story more each chapter. Can't wait for more
    October 7th, 2010 at 07:46am
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    aww "baf"
    October 6th, 2010 at 10:35pm
  • teenagedream91

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    Awww she's just adorable. I was laughing so hard when Hayley made terrified screaming snowmen and to put the cherry on top she destroyed them and acted like a monster. lol She's a very interesting character. She's my favorite so far. Can't wait for the next one
    October 4th, 2010 at 07:03am
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    LOl, I love how he's such a dad now.
    October 3rd, 2010 at 06:55pm
  • teenagedream91

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    Hayley is such a cutie pie. ^.^
    it's surprising how she rememebers things so clearly and figures out that bad things happen when she is alone. I like how you made Travis clueless on what do to. I guess it's not instinct to rock a baby for him. It's natural for me to start to rock a baby. Other stories I've read Travis knows what to do but for some reason I think he is clueless when it comes to babies not only
    babies but baby girls. It's gonna be interesting him raising a baby girl. Kinda like three men and a baby classic movie. Lol
    October 2nd, 2010 at 12:23am
  • valary_roxs_07

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    Omg I love this story I just started reading it update soon please
    September 29th, 2010 at 05:24am
  • Jamie Glynn;

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    snooooe babies!
    September 27th, 2010 at 08:21pm
  • Extreme-as-FMX

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    LOVE it!!! I can't wait for the next update.
    September 27th, 2010 at 01:53pm
  • Charlie..

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    I love how you go into Haley's point of view about how much an adventure this whole experience is.
    The dogs being dragons and the hallway a cave. I epecially like the Travis Giant one. That seems acurate.
    Anyway, I can tell this is going to be an amazing story.
    September 27th, 2010 at 10:14am
  • teenagedream91

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    Such a cute story. I love the little girl and how you show her view of things. I was confused with the dragons until I realized it was the dogs. Like how you kept Travis clueless with the whole kid thing, it's adorable. Can't wait for the next chapters.
    September 27th, 2010 at 04:04am
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    ohhh sihtt shoppinggg
    September 27th, 2010 at 03:18am
  • Charlie..

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    Ahahaha! This is so adorable!!!
    It's so cute I'm gonna die!
    September 21st, 2010 at 08:40am
  • Jamie Glynn;

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    one update doesnt seem like enough.
    September 21st, 2010 at 12:25am
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    two chapters in and i'm already addicted, good on ya
    September 20th, 2010 at 05:19am
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    two chapters in and i'm already addicted, good on ya
    September 20th, 2010 at 05:19am
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    Awesome this is a really cool story hope you continue and i cant wait for the next one :)))))
    September 20th, 2010 at 04:38am
  • KaityAnn1986

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    I like this, would love to see more of this story.
    September 20th, 2010 at 04:35am
  • Jamie Glynn;

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    :O "then I'm fucked.." <lawls!
    September 20th, 2010 at 04:29am
  • Jamie Glynn;

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    Updateeee updateeeee updatee
    September 20th, 2010 at 04:16am
  • Charlie..

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    I'm really excited for this.
    Itkll be weird to see how Travis handles a child.
    Can't wait, dear!
    September 19th, 2010 at 10:29am
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