Smile for the Camera & Strike up the Band - Comments

-Chapter 4-

How do you amaze me with every sentence you write? This was the perfect ending!

You made Patrick, Alessandria, and DJ seem like a family at the end, yet keeping it open to let our minds wander. Patrick and Alessandria are the picture perfect couple.

I LOVE how you had Gabe hold off on the sex and create a more emotional relationship first. But, again, you left it open to see what Erica decides to do. It was just... PERFECT.

-Chapter 3-

I adore how Patrick is becoming the "fatherly figure" and when Alessandria told Patrick she loved him, my heart melted. Oh, they are so perfect for each other.

Gabe and Erica better be in this for the long haul, because I want them to work out so badly. Erica has transformed so much, and it's amazing to be able to see the changes she has gone through. Gabe is so perfect for her, they are amazing, I love it.

-Chapter 2-

Perfect... I don't know how else to describe it. Gabe is just the cutest. Patrick is just the sweetest. It's just perfect. <3

-Chapter 1-
Aww... I loved it. I really like how you have put Patrick in the fatherly role, and how he and Alessandria work so well together. It makes me so happy to read about them, especially when little DJ is involved.

Oh, Erica, she is my favorite. I love how she and Alessandria were talking about their boys. I hope her and Gabe work out, I'm rooting for them, they are my new favorite couple... The wedding should interesting, and possibly filled with drama?

Awww! This was so cute!
I can't wait for the next story!

Aw, I was really looking forward to seeing what happened with Alessandria and Patrick lol. I shall be checking your blog as you say lol.

Great last chapter/part though. Erica and Gabe are progressing along, Ria and Patrick are happy, it's all good :-)

And Dacain....he's just too cute for words

I barely commented on this one >.< I feel so bad.

I love how you tied up the two relationships. Gabe really did change a lot.. but so did the two main lead girls xD

I'm not even going to say "I can't believe it's over" anymore because I know there's going to be more.
I can't wait for the next installment! The Maine <3

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I loveloveLOVED the way you decided to end things in this story. Patrick, Alessandria, and Dacian are well on their way to being an actual family. Gabe and Erica are getting ever closer to putting a label on their relationship. It's great how everything seems open-ended, but at the same time, I know that everything turned out perfectly.

As always, thank you very much for such an amaaazing story :)

so i was doingmy last email check before going to bed and i saw this and automatically woke up. definitely going to regret it tomorrow when I'm exhausted, but it was WELLLLL worth it.

I'm so sad this is over, but its been so lovely reading. *sigh* i can't believe its over.

wow great chapter!! i love how ria accidently said i love you but it worked =) very sweet...plus erica's dress is kinda girly haha

Awww. The ending made me smile :)

Yeah!! Alessandria told Patrick she loved him. YEAH!!! Oh I said that already didn't i? whoops. It's so adorable that Patrick is acting fatherly towards Dacian (sp). I just love these two together and him showing that he actually cares about her son too is a good thing.

Erica and Gabe...i don't know what to say lol. I love how she gets frazzled every time he kisses her though. That right there should tell her something.

Great chapter......here's one loveydovey comment to encourage the next chapter!!! :) I love your stories and as usual, you did not dissapoint. Can't wait to see what you have in store next as I know it will be awesome!

That was an absolutely lovely chapter.

Gabe and Erica's reaction to each others outfits, their bickering, and of course the kiss in the car were a perfect example of the I-like-you-but-we're-too-cool-to-be-cutesy mentality. It's nice to see that they haven't gone mushy.

On another note, PATRICK AND ALESSANDRIA SHARED "I LOVE YOU"S!!!
There are no words to describe how excited I am over this momentous occasion.

i kinda liked the scatteredness of it. I liked it.
But i've loved this entire series since it began. I'm addicted to it like a hooker to her heroine

please update soon. i nearly DIED waiting for this :)
it's not nearly as jumpy as you think it is and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

do we get a new update soon? im missing the defy characterss!!! :( x

I *loved* the end of this chapter with Gabe and Erica!!

I absolutely adore Gabe :)
Patrick and Alessandria make me want to frolic through an empty field playfully tossing puppies into the air... softly though.

Anywho. I love this.

EEEEEEEEEE. Love it.