Burn. - Comments

Honestly, this is amazing. It's to the brim with lovely detail, emotions and descriptions. This OF is one of the best OF's I've seen on here. Well done! I also love the summary. It really made me actually want to read the first chapter, I wasn't just doing it for a swap anymore. x] The whole plot is very well done and I'm surprised at the lack of comments on this! Can't wait for more updates. You're doing a good job so far and the banner and layout are lovely. <3

i'm falling in love with this story.
i can not wait for more

Honestly this is a really interesting and well written piece of original fiction. I know you think it is really weird for mibba, but honestly mibba has a lot of mainstream stuff it is so refreshing to read something unique and out of the status quo. Your descriptions are beautiful, although at times a little over-fabricated, and your main character seems legitimately MALE, which is really hard for most teenage girls to accomplish, and you even have the perfect excuse for him to have feminine thoughts by being so closely connected to Julia. Nonetheless, he is a very real character. Please update soon :)

its so open so far... but really good.
i hope you take to an even better place!

-thank you&come again.

Truthfully, this is incredible. Definitely one of my new favorite stories, even as short as it is so far.
The emotion, the descriptions, the character, and even the plot have successfully blown me away.

Dude, I don't know what else to say besides... don't ever give up on this story.
If you do, I'll be seriously sad, okay? And maybe pretty please update soon as well?

Haha, this is amazing. <3

Okay. For real now, though.

I really liked this. And I like where this is heading. I think that you need to write this often and update often, because if you don't, I'll get on your ass about it in school and on AIM. A lot. Period. No exceptions, ifs, ands, or butts.

(:

FIRST COMMENT.