Annabelle - Comments

Get rid of Shads huh? I'd like to see how that'll work out, I really want him gone, but I don't think it'll happen, but if Syn finds out about his baby I think he'll be willing to off Shads.

That's gonna be one cute baby! hahaha!

I wanted to say, that I highly enjoyed this particular story. It wasn’t too cliché. It had no previous references. (Like vampires sparkling in the light = Twilight) It was superbly original. I also appreciate the flow of the story and minimal gaps of time. I like the grammar, you’ll find having someone else editing is a lot easier. I like how the character, Annabelle puts up ACUTUAL resistance, which not many writers would do. All in all, you did a good job. If only 1/3 of the writers on here actually took the time and effort for a story, they wouldn’t have to plead for subscribers. ;) Congrats.

-SF

She pregnant :O
Oh wow only two chapter left..something big is going to happen in those two chapters :D
I can't wait for the more soon.

Oh boy if it ends in two chapters she's gonna do something drastic.
Can't wait for more
<3 Michele

loved

So Matt did tell Brian and lied to Anna.
Wow now that is harsh, I mean Anna trusted him but he ended up lying and telling Brian anyways.
YES! The baby is Brian's, though I wonder what Matt will do when he finds out that Anna is pregnant.
So Matt just acted nice and loving so he could get what he wanted????
Anna should really tell Brian that she is pregnant with his child!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UDPATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

God, what a dick. :| Shadows needs to get off his high horse and BOTH of them need to look at it from her side. If she hadn't slept with shadows he would have thrown a fit. I hope Brian knows that and if he starts acting like a dick too I'm going to be pissed. >.>

Fuck Shadows!

oh dear :/ I really want her and Brian together!!

I finally don't wanna kick yo ass. I liked how throughout the whole chapter she was sick of Matthew because to be quite honest with you: SO WAS I. I'm half wondering if by "I know what you've done" Brian meant about how he saw the pregnancy test and she was thinking about how she might be pregnant with Shadow's baby or how Shadows told him about them doin the dirty... well I guess either way she looks like a stupid bitch because she slept with Shadows. MAYBE SHE SHOULD HAVE JUST LISTENED TO ME, GAWD. I MEAN. Yeah.

I'm stoked for the next chapter. Please go pee on the stick now Annabelle. <3

i'm shocked that she's surprised that matt lied to her...i mean come on he'll do/say anything to get what he wants. and even if matt didn't say anything she most likely smells like him

OMG!<--- That was literally what I said when I finished reading this chapter!!! He knows!!!! This is getting really good! I truly can't wait for the next update!!!

That fucker!!

loved this chapter :) cannot wait for the next update! soon pleaseeee

I had a feeling that Matt would tell Brian that he slept with Annabelle..now Brian pissed at her D:
Great update :D

NO!!! Good God! Please let this be a tiny dispute that they can easily get over! What if she's having his baby? Ugh! I've got so many questions running through my head... Blah! Please please please let Brian and Annabelle be together!

Oh crap!
Brian knows about what Anna and Shadows have been doing.
Man he is pissed to since he just stormed up the stairs without saying anything else to her.
I believe that Shadows did open his mouth and told Brian that he had indeed slept with Anna.
And i have no doubt that Anna is pregnant with Brian's baby!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shadows is such a freaking jerk!!!!!
seriously how much of an ass can he be?
I hope she gives him hell for it.
<3 Michele

UUUUUUUUUUUUGH DIE MATTHEW.
God.

And Annabelle is a dutty no good whore. (Again.)
God.

Despite how angry I probably sound in this comment, it was still a good chapter. And please do update soon so I don't have to strangle you. That is all. :)