Annabelle - Comments

You've got me on the edge of my seat with this story! Update again soon please!
~Kayla

Me thinks that Anna is pregnant!
Since she is showing signs of morning sicks and that she is throwing up!
At least she is being a little more civil to Shadows but she won't let him get intimately close to her.
And Brian is really trying to find a way out of the contract so he and Anna can be together.
So Anna might have to sleep with Shadows in the future and just want to warn Brian about it.
I cannot wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shadows had to go an ruin an alright night with his comment about sex . . .
But Brian made it all better :)
They better end up together when all is said and done, they are made for each other!.
<3 Michele

I know this comment is a few days late but I've been busy with school and whatnot.
I really liked the update though!
The last sentence in the story describes everything that I was feeling about it.
Matt is so manipulative and I love it, but I hate that Annabelle and Brian are separated.
They have strong feelings toward each other and I hope that they stay together in the end.
I do want to know where Brian went to though.
Maybe he was fixing something up so that he could run away with Annabelle or found a way that they can be together.
I can't believe that it's ending in 5 chapters, but all good things must come to an end.
I can't wait to see what you have in store for Annabelle!!!!

i fucking LOVE you AND your STORY you rock my motherfucking socks♥♥

So glad you updated!!!

DUDE just read this in two days. It's brilliant & one of my favorites. Brian<33

Only 5 more chapters?? Are you planning on a sequel, please tell me you are? I love this story so much. I just wish Annabelle would get with Brian, not Matt. Although I do enjoy she having to suffer with being with Matt, I enjoy it.

I hope you are having fun working and I will be awaiting the next chapter!!

That is a twisted game Matt is playing to have Annabelle. D:
Great update

"It was all a twisted little game that we had become pawns to." Epic ending!
Update Soon!

It was all a twisted little game that we had become pawns to.

You always end the chapters with an awesome little sentence like that in this story. It's absolutely fantastic.

Did I read 5 more chapters until it's over?! This story has become a small little part of me because I love it so much. I may end up rereading it - and that's saying a lot...because I never reread shit. Ever.

I'm just stoked for the big thing that nobody is expecting. <3

Can't wait woman. Love this, love you.

Gah Matt is such an ass! I just want him gone so that Annabelle can be with Brian and be happy damn it!

Brian is a sad Panda!
I feel horrible for the two of them . . .
I hope they find a way together in the end, without any sort of blood bath.
<3 Michele

Wow so Anna is being civil with Shadows even though he has taken everything away from her.
And it has been a month since Anna and Syn have last talked to each other.
I bet it's killing him to know that Shadows can keep them away from each other and if Syn doesn't comply then Matt can threaten Anna's life.
I look forward to the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"I don't really like it," you say. GURL Y U SEW CRAZY. I loved this. It was a filler but not one of those boring ass ones (like I'd write) where all you do is describe shit and how the person feels inside and what they think of things as they sit in one spot. This was riveting. That was probably not a good word - because I don't know what it means - but it was still awesome.

And Matt's still a douche.

mean mattie...uncool

tisk tisk Matt and his anger, she is never ever going to like his in the lest bit if he keeps trying to hit her. when will that man learn? i'm guessing never and i'm shocked that brian saved her from getting hit and he didn't get his ass handed to him, i guess matt maybe starting to see that he is in the wrong for trying to put his hands on her

awesome chapter, love this story

Matt better redeem himself.
He didn't have to get all pissy about her leaving the room if she just wanted Advil-
Hell, he could've gotten it for her if he wanted her back in the bedroom so bad.
I'm glad that Syn is watching over her, but like I said earlier, Matt better redeem himself and work to get Annabelle to work with him.

I really hope that Annabelle stays with Syn!
He is like a knight in shining armor in how he keeps on saving her from everything lol
Shadows has been so mean and backstabbing to both Annabelle and Syn.
I feel like he's just pushing her to be with Syn.
I can't wait to see what happens next!!!