Annabelle - Comments

  • boriquachicka

    boriquachicka (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    He saved her, He saved her! Haha Shadz, Syn Saved her! yummm...
    I loved it! As usual.
    And I re-read a bit... and cracked up again at the "Shadows be creepin'" comment.
    June 21st, 2011 at 06:26am
  • justhannah;

    justhannah; (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    103
    Location:
    United States
    Is it me, or does Shadows just act more and more like a fucking PMSing bitch as this story progresses?
    Loved it, but holy crap. He's not gonna get any respect from her at all now.
    June 21st, 2011 at 05:55am
  • cat-vengeance

    cat-vengeance (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    im going to be so bummed when this is over
    June 21st, 2011 at 05:12am
  • chelcie

    chelcie (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    Your an amazing writer. i love love love it!!!!
    June 21st, 2011 at 04:58am
  • XtremeFairy

    XtremeFairy (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    18
    Location:
    United States
    Amazing update...I love how syn stood up for annabelle from shadow.
    June 21st, 2011 at 04:55am
  • reeseynicole21

    reeseynicole21 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    i love it
    June 21st, 2011 at 04:35am
  • yellowjellybean14

    yellowjellybean14 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    oh yay for the update, i am so glad that you updated i feel like you have not updated in forever and a day. please do update soon.
    June 21st, 2011 at 04:27am
  • hachie

    hachie (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    Wow so now Shadows finalized the contact and she officially belongs to them both.
    Damn that must suck to have almost everything taken out of her room, only a bed and blankets in there,
    I don't think Anna will be civil toward Shadows since she wants Brian because he is more compassionate than Shadows.
    I wonder how Shadows will redeem himself to Anna because she hates hi guts big time!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 21st, 2011 at 04:23am
  • Fictional.Reality

    Fictional.Reality (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    D: Shadows is such a dick . . .
    I feel like for her to actually try and get on his good side he needs to be nice also
    but somehow i have a feeling that it wont happen
    <3 Michele
    June 21st, 2011 at 04:02am
  • chelcie

    chelcie (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    You are amazing!!!! I love it!!!!!! More, more, more please!!!!!
    June 16th, 2011 at 10:19pm
  • boriquachicka

    boriquachicka (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    Dammit.
    More please [:
    I'm in love.
    June 14th, 2011 at 02:39am
  • boriquachicka

    boriquachicka (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    Dammit.
    More please [:
    I'm in love.
    June 14th, 2011 at 02:39am
  • hmc09

    hmc09 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    love this story
    June 13th, 2011 at 05:56pm
  • hachie

    hachie (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    Wow now that is a lot of drama!
    Anna was right, she did see Shadows there at the window and Brian didn't believe her which he should have.
    Man he is really pissed off, throwing Gates at the door and backing Anna up to the wall.
    Dang Anna has a lot of guts to say that her and Gates had sex more than once and add in that it was right under Shadows nose.
    Woah so Anna now belongs solely to Shadows instead of him and Gates?
    I cannot wait for the next update!!!!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 13th, 2011 at 08:06am
  • justhannah;

    justhannah; (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    103
    Location:
    United States
    Oh my god, what an ASS! Jesus he had no right to do that.
    Damn. I am pissed off at him so much right now. :|
    loved it though.
    I hope that brian and him don't get in a physical fight but if they do, I hope brian kicks his ass.
    June 13th, 2011 at 07:25am
  • darkeyes14226

    darkeyes14226 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    Well there was never any doubt that he would get pissed
    June 13th, 2011 at 07:19am
  • Nia_Flores

    Nia_Flores (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    37
    Location:
    Honduras
    O.M.G. I knew hell would break lose, but I never expected THIS! Its sooo good! I feel bad for Annabelle... but its so good!!!!
    June 13th, 2011 at 06:17am
  • Nanner.

    Nanner. (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    Canada
    This chapter was by far brilliant. I loved every last bit of it. You say "Long time no update" but I think that you 100% delivered and it well worth the wait.

    Gates and Annabelle are getting more adorable by the second and even though throughout the chapter they were worrying about Shadows, they still showed ... affection for eachother and it made me go aw. :D

    I love Shadows character. That's really weird - considering he's an abusive piece of shit in this story - but you make his character what it's supposed to be and don't hesitate to make it as hardcore as possibe. That and the fact that he's polar opposite of what he is in real life. Just amazes me that someone who loves him as much as you do actually pulled off writing that. LOL. <3

    "Two times actually." L O L. Absolutely loved it. I like how Annabelle hasn't lost her sarcastic comments like she had way at the beginning.

    Annabelle has officially gone to the dark side. Lettin' Gates drink hur bloods and shit ~

    Love this oodles. (I said oodles. That means I'm serius ~)
    <3
    June 13th, 2011 at 05:01am
  • XxBipolarBabyxX

    XxBipolarBabyxX (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    Omg DRAMA!!!! I love it, Matt is so gonna tear gates a new one! Awesome update!!!!
    June 13th, 2011 at 03:48am
  • avenging angel

    avenging angel (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    D: oh my god!!!!!! Matt is pissed!!!!! I wonder what he's gonna do to syn... Great update!!!:)
    June 13th, 2011 at 03:44am