He saved her, He saved her! Haha Shadz, Syn Saved her! yummm... I loved it! As usual. And I re-read a bit... and cracked up again at the "Shadows be creepin'" comment.
Is it me, or does Shadows just act more and more like a fucking PMSing bitch as this story progresses? Loved it, but holy crap. He's not gonna get any respect from her at all now.
Wow so now Shadows finalized the contact and she officially belongs to them both. Damn that must suck to have almost everything taken out of her room, only a bed and blankets in there, I don't think Anna will be civil toward Shadows since she wants Brian because he is more compassionate than Shadows. I wonder how Shadows will redeem himself to Anna because she hates hi guts big time! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
D: Shadows is such a dick . . . I feel like for her to actually try and get on his good side he needs to be nice also but somehow i have a feeling that it wont happen <3 Michele
Wow now that is a lot of drama! Anna was right, she did see Shadows there at the window and Brian didn't believe her which he should have. Man he is really pissed off, throwing Gates at the door and backing Anna up to the wall. Dang Anna has a lot of guts to say that her and Gates had sex more than once and add in that it was right under Shadows nose. Woah so Anna now belongs solely to Shadows instead of him and Gates? I cannot wait for the next update!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh my god, what an ASS! Jesus he had no right to do that. Damn. I am pissed off at him so much right now. :| loved it though. I hope that brian and him don't get in a physical fight but if they do, I hope brian kicks his ass.
This chapter was by far brilliant. I loved every last bit of it. You say "Long time no update" but I think that you 100% delivered and it well worth the wait.
Gates and Annabelle are getting more adorable by the second and even though throughout the chapter they were worrying about Shadows, they still showed ... affection for eachother and it made me go aw. :D
I love Shadows character. That's really weird - considering he's an abusive piece of shit in this story - but you make his character what it's supposed to be and don't hesitate to make it as hardcore as possibe. That and the fact that he's polar opposite of what he is in real life. Just amazes me that someone who loves him as much as you do actually pulled off writing that. LOL. <3
"Two times actually." L O L. Absolutely loved it. I like how Annabelle hasn't lost her sarcastic comments like she had way at the beginning.
Annabelle has officially gone to the dark side. Lettin' Gates drink hur bloods and shit ~
Love this oodles. (I said oodles. That means I'm serius ~) <3
I loved it! As usual.
And I re-read a bit... and cracked up again at the "Shadows be creepin'" comment.