Smirt - Comments

Omg, I just started reading this and I'm already in love with it. I LOVE your writing style. Continuing!

Love <3 :D

very good update (: LOVED IT <3

Ohmygod chapter 13 is so intense!! Please update!! Please im getting excited on what will happen next!! I love them! Dahlia and chris = perfect couple. Your a good writer i swear!!! How old are you though? Ur my idol <3

hey this is really great ;D can't wait to see where it goes <3

ahhh it gets so much better as you keep writing :)
i absolutely love your writing style, you have talent.

i adore chris drew. And i adore this story :)
Please write more! :)

Hello. I am one of those 'silent' readers. I usually don't comment for a simple reason. I am not good at grammar or spelling and such. Usually, authors ask for any thing we think can be better or things like that. Some like they might get upset if you just comment about liking the story. I do like how this story is going though. I just wanted to say that.

nice (:

I love this. :DD
They're absolutely, positively adorable together.

awe i love it soo far girly!!!
haha as usual ur story has a lot of funny parts!!!
&&&gosh whenever she talks 2 gavin i can imagine u sayin it =P
see ya @ school 2morrow!!!&&&dont 4get its blue schedule&&&we got hw 4 USH

P.S. I CANT WAIT 2 C RAVENNE'S FACE WHEN WE GIVE HER OUR GIFTS XD

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That's my face through the whole story I like it

this story is simply amazing <3
its fantastically written, and the plot is great.
i can't wait for another chapter :>

oye this was very good update (:

very nice. Wondering who it is though......

Awesome update can't wait till the next one(:

Please update soon I like it so far (:

The things I like about this story, definitely weigh out what I dislike, by far. Firstly, the layout is pleasant on the eyes. The colors are nicely put together, and, well, they're just appealing colors. Also, the image is nice. Secondly, the way your sentences flow, the way things are said, seems very realistic to me. I'm one to appreciate realism in all works of literature. Also, it was refreshing to read paragraphs that contained words that were intelligent, not the overused adjactives I'm so used to reading over and over in a lot of stories. The errors I may have stumbled apon in this nice piece of work so far were little to none. Good job. (: