I love your story not many great criminal minds stories out there. As to advice keep writing as you are. Also for this being your first story it's amazing. You are truly a wonderful writer. I really can't wait for more. Also question if you can answer with out it being a spoiler. Is rossi or gideon her father? Cause in chapter 1 when morgan said that it wasn't the first time she met gideon it got me thinking that. Also in chapter 2 when she came up with a lie about metting rossi at a class got me thinking that.