please please please update this wonderful story. :) i your style of writing. your writing flows so well and you describe everything so beautifuly that it's easy to read. :) please update soon. i want to know what happens next! :D
Brilliant, as per usual, and makes me want to immediately discontinue my story. No lie. I ALSO did not get my subscription update for this story, which maks me sad. :(
But yeah. Your story is so fantastic, and it inspired me AGAIN! Thank you. I was going to your page to say hi, 'cuz I miss you (<3), and I can't get to your comments page since you updated your profile. So, comment babe! Ttyl, love! :*
OH MY GOD. I didn't get my update notification for this and ugh#TEENAGELIFEPROBLEMS. UGH. But oh my god. OH. MY. GOD. You're out doing yourself. Aw, poor Iris. I would have slapped Jake if I heard what she heard. Maybe that's just me. I don't know. Meh. Mike, why so desperate? I feel kind of bad for him. A little. I'MMA CUT JAKE THOUGH, TALKIN' ABOUT SMILIN' AT THE THOUGHT OF BREAKIN' BELLA'S HAND. :sassy snap:: And he's making fun of Quil's imprinting. It's kind of cute in a pedo/creepy way... HE NEEDS TO MAKE UP HIS MIND BEFORE I SLAP HIM AND LEAVE BRUISES. >.> Embry and Quil's reactions to the 'smell': priceless. BUT REALLY JAKE STOP BEIN' SUCH A LITTLE BITCH AND MAKE UP WITH IRIS AND SHIT GODDAMN. cough. uh. OH. OH. OH. So you wanna care after you hear she's dancing with some creepy blonde kid? :sassy snap:: MIKE. OOH. Stop being such a tool. Damn. >:/ AW. Jake stop saving the day and making me want to forgive you. c: Mike, stop being so clueless and acting like you don't know what you're doing. fool. AW NO HELL NO COMIN' UP IN HERE AND TRYNA GET ON BELLA'S GOOD SIDE THEN TRYNA ACT LIKE YOU IRIS' BOYFRIEND AW HELLNAH. GTFO. cough. um. Jake WHAT. WHAT EVEN. I swear to god, if somebody doesn't cut him I will. :huffs: Cough. So, uh yeah... update soon? :') This was intense, lovey.
this story is just so amazing. I SWEAR. My heart beat out of my chest as soon as I saw this was updated. ... okay, that was a lie, but STILL! It was super close to what really happened! Anyways, I really love Jacob getting all jealous... It makes me grin wickedly. Update soon?(-: I need more of this love triangle square shape.<3
After I read this chapter I want a new one, I'm just greedy like that.
I liked Iris a lot more in this chapter because she's not giving into Jacob, or maybe she'll give into him soon, hopefully not though.
I'm going to agree with a lot of the other comments and say, I want her to hook up with Seth. Jacob in my opinion needs to see that she won't take him back after every mistake he makes, even if he apologizes.
Jacob needs to make up his mind, and choose agirl, Ivy.
I agree with Iridescent. JACOB NEEDS TO BECUTWHOOPED.. I loved the part where he stormed off when he found out about Iris dancing with that sleazy dude, Eric? Whatever. He's not important. SETH IS IMPORTANT! Where is he? :3 I know that this is a Jacob story but seriously, he's acting like a fucking douche. I want some Clearwater lovin' if Jake's not going to (as prestige said) say he's madly in love with her and push her against the wall or something and make love to her. C: can't wait for the next update!
OMG this story breaks my heart. Here Jacob imprinted on a Iris and she was ready to love him but he rejects her. First he tries to kill her and then he bluntly states that he doesn't care for Iris and that he loves Bella. I cannot wait for the next update! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!