Say You Love Me - Comments

I loved it. but now i want more!

Jacob your mood swings are giving me whiplash! Jeez make up your mind or something!
It was lovely though! I loved the update and hey just think of it this way it was quicker than the last update! :)
Mike seemed to be acting exactly like he normal does. I was not surprised that he came on to Iris and acted like a creep! But that is just him.
Alice was awesome as always you show her personality well!
As much as we know Iris has to end up with Jacob I think she should just get with Seth right now since he is the only decent guy that likes her! And Jacob can't even be mad because he is rejecting her! Plus I love Seth he is adorable and hilarious! :)
Amazing update and I can't wait for more!
Amanda

That was magnificent and superb.

First of all: AHGDHSSJHGGTURGJNBJB HBEUHGERLHEGHNVDJSHFUEH4T5YRR[6UPPR. HOLY BALLS AND CASSEROLE. DAMMIT JAKE. WHY CAN'T YOU JUST NOT BE A JERK!? OK, it was totally cute of him to be all "Mike. Go die." BUT OH MY GOD. JUST SAY YOU LOVE HER AND PUSH HER UP AGAINST SOMETHING AND MAKE LOVE TO HER. JEEZ.

Oh Iris. Come here. Let's hug, poor thing. That was an amazing update. I loved the POV change, adds spice and whatnot. I loved Alice in this, she's just so amazing. That "I'm going to die in these"/"And you'll look great doing so." conversation made me LOL hard. I just, I just love you. <3

Your wording is perfect, the layout is perfect, Iris is an amazing and wonderful and fun to read OC and Jake is a hot jealous jerk man face. UNTIL NEXT TIME! /disappears in a cloud of smoke.

i love the story and can't wait for you to update some more, keep up the good work. And i hope things work out, but Jacob is such a jerk, he doesn't deserve Iris! Asshole should shut up and chose who he wants to be with, because either way one of them is going to get hurt, meaning Iris!

oh my fucking god.
I spazzed all through the story. i don't even know how, like, I would just read one chapter and as it was reloading to the next chapter, I would just jump, in my fucking seat. My computer was being slow on purpose just so I would just like spazz
I love this story so much!
Jake is a fucking asshole >_<
When Seth took her back to Edward's after Jake fucking attacked her I was all, oh, oh Seth better damn well make a move. I don't enjoy triangles too much, but when they're being written well,
they're a guilty pleasure.
You're doing very well so far.
I love Seth.
Hope you update soon! like, very very sooooon :D <3

update!!!!!! this is getting intense....er...it was intense b4

Iris is an idiot, I am in love with this story but, gah.
Jacob almost kills her and she takes him back in like a chapter or two, I get it imprinting is strong, but, he tried to kill her.

Then in front of her he tells her he loves another girl. xD

Please update this story, sorry I'm ranting a bit but it's a good thing since I'm so into this story. :D

update

update, update, update, update, update, update!!!!!!!!

I usually don't read this stuff cause I'm not that big of a fan of Twilight and stuff,
BUT THIS IS AMAZING.
please update soon?(:
just subscribed.

So I finished reading, finally.
Actually, I finished last night, but I fell asleep before I could post this.
Thoughts:
JAKE NEEDS A CUTTIN'.
Still.
I thought he was going to fix things with Iris, so then I was all like, yay, Iris & Jake--technically, it could be Irke--are going to fix things and live happily ever after...then he pulls that with Bella. -.- I just... UGH JAKE. >.< WHY YOU DO THAT?! No, no, this cannot be. He's so jealous, and of Seth, who looks like he's still thirteen or s/t. -.- BAD JAKE.
Iris is still as boss as ever. She's how old and still trying to get picked up by guys in high school? That's just how you know how cool she is. I'm still on Team Iris, because Jake keeps screwing up and being an idiot. -___-
And as for Bella and Edward, meh. I like how Bella's getting developed, but Edward's kind of just...there and awkwardly overprotective... Poor Bella and her hand! D: Is there going to be a showdown between Edward and Jake now? :DD
My only complaint is that there aren't any new chapters, hehe.
Keep up the good work, please and thank you. (:

Oh hey I got a new page too! :D
This is kind of uncanny.
I'll just keep on reading now, hehe.

HAYYYY.
What's up?
So, true to my word, I'm reading this.
And to be honest, I don't even like Twilightanymore and this story's making me like it again.
Iris is so adorable and I love how you're developing her character. The whole switching up with the points of view is really nice too, keeps things from getting monotonous.
I just finished chapter seven and I know I'm not done yet, but, uh...
JAKE'S ASKIN' FOR A BEATDOWN AND A CUTTIN'.
Just thought you should know. I want to pop some popcorn and see this unfold, seriously. He better cut it out if he knows what's good for him...no pun intended, lol.
I spy with my little brown eye some competition on the horizon, hehe. Look at Seth being all sly and making Jake jealous. MMHM. ::sassy snap: I'll just keep on reading and stop rambling now, hehe.
In all seriousness though, this is honestly one of the best pieces of fan-fiction I've ever seen on this site. Keep up the good work, darlin'. :')

I love this! But ever time they start doing good he messes things up! I feel so bad for Iris she trys so hard! Jacob is being a total dick!

i love, love, love, LOVE this story.
your writing is absolutely wonderful. :D
i cannot wait to see where you take this!
and i kinda', sorta' really want to punch jake right now.
he's being a lil' dick. :P
update soon please? (:
♥analeise.

AHHHH! Love it!

I'm in love with htis, from the very start.
<3

It's one of the best Jacob Black stories out there.
I really hope you keep up with the good work.
:D

oh my gosh!!!!!
I love love love this!! :D
You write so lovely, it flows and I see no grammar or spelling that is wrong. :)
Wow, Jacob's feelings are going everywhere!
he is sooo jealous.
haha, please please please update! :D
p.s. I love Seth. :) He is sooo nice to Iris, but I think Jacob is right for her or are you going to have a twist? haha I love it!

Aw, that was so sad. :[
Subscribed!

Aw cant wait for the next chapter, this was sad :(