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Author [purple freckles]
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Ashen Faced
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I do enjoy how dark this is. Things on this site can get to bubbly and happy, but having something depressing and shocking is a good wake up call.
January 11th, 2011 at 09:04pm
teen spirit.
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I love this!
But you should really space out your paragraphs more, it's easier to read.
The layout fits the story nicely.
Your writing is great too, the way you described the death and everything, perfect.
Great job! :)
September 25th, 2010 at 07:39pm
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