gah as soon as I as the word "vampire" I was all like "awwww shiit; here's some twilight shit!" [notice, the gangsterish-ness up there ^] but I must say :] you made it good and fresh [fresh and so clean-clean] [dont get me wrong, I like the books, but man..the TWIHARDS scare me....]
AND; I rubbed my contact out around like chapter...8..maybe; but I kept trucking on with just one contact on; felt like a pirate.
Gasp and drool... I love the new update. It is so not a filler. It was so cute. I really wish I could have a love like this. Sigh. :) Anyway, awesome update!
Aww... I'm so sad that Avenged isn't coming to Australia. Must be a bummer. :( Anyway, great update! It's absolutely amazing!!! I love how Lily and Zacky are... they're like the dream couple that every girl wants to be. A sweet boyfriend and a sweet girl. :) Too bad there's no such thing as mates in our human society. Life would be so much easier and beautiful-er that way. Thanks for updating & I'm inspired to make another banner. So... if it's alright, I'll be making one. :D
Lovely story. However, your grammar is distracting. I recommend fixing the punctuation and spelling mistakes. I'm not really a grammar nazi, but I think this story would be absolutly amazing if you fixed common grammar mistakes (like using the correct their/there/they're). I figured I should tell you since the point of this website is to advance our writing and not to just say "I love this story! Update more." But, please continue writing this story.
your welcome for the banner. :) Thanks for mentioning me. I love your new update. I totally like Micheal. :D But sorta hate Dean... :( And that Kyle guy... what if he actually liked Michael instead? lolz... Just wishing everyone would end up happy. But if Kyle likes her then i'm for Team Zacky! :D
hey! I know I should be doing homework and such, but i decided I need a break, and I read you story!!!! :D I love it. Sorry... although you liked the banner... I guess I should have added a vampire. I didn't know that zacky was a vampire. lolz... Anyway, I love your story! Subscribed to it too! :D <3