Don't Speak, Don't Say A Word - Comments

  • seeing for the blind

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    lolololololololololololol..............................spamming your page!
    December 5th, 2012 at 07:52pm
  • Emotional Havoc

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    This story is pretty sweet! But can you please point out which Pov it is , when I reading Mitch's Pov I thought he was Myka. So please do that.
    May 15th, 2011 at 03:29pm
  • Hot Chelle Rae

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    Can you say AWESOME!!! I can. AWESOME!!! plz update!
    January 20th, 2011 at 12:56am
  • kitten

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    This seems really good. Im enjoying it a lot.
    November 28th, 2010 at 12:38am
  • Jetix

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    Ooh, I really like how descriptive you two are- it helps to understand the personalities of the characters.
    I do get confused sometimes as some sentences seem like run-ons. I'd say more punctuation, but other than that it's pretty good.. I'm left in a state where I can't wait to read more. XD
    October 1st, 2010 at 09:12am
  • violetkarma

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    I love your story so far, but whats a neko?
    September 29th, 2010 at 12:44am