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  • jessisthebest

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    What the....shit dude that was intense! I honestly don't know what I would do if I were in Elena's shoes right now I can't even make a valid assumption...... I actually can't wait to see how you end this... happy, sad or bitter sweet its going to be epic no doubt :)
    p.s John just gained some precious points back not all of them but some
    January 4th, 2011 at 05:06am
  • ReganBarakat

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    NO, NO, NO, NO, NIO,NO,NO, NO, NO, I freaking cried my eyes out. OH MY GOSH. Why did she leave? He was crying over her, it's apparent she loves him, doesn't she WANT to be different then her parents? She needs to fix it!
    January 4th, 2011 at 05:01am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    I think (or just hope) that he shows up at her house and then they do some more talking and then they get back together!
    January 4th, 2011 at 04:52am
  • youleftme.

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    I PREDICT THAT THERE WILL BE A SEQUEL OF SOME SORT.
    January 4th, 2011 at 04:42am
  • MYP

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    LOVE it. Can't say that enough! I can't believe it's almost over, but I'm so excited to see how you ended it!!
    Update again soon please!!!
    January 4th, 2011 at 03:02am
  • purple_em

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    The last line of this chapter was so bittersweet!
    January 4th, 2011 at 12:10am
  • C-u-on-the-Flipside

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    I love this story! Her and John don't work but work all at the same time. It's so confusing haha I dont really want it to be over but at the same time I can't wait to see how it all ends. Hopefully you update soon :)
    January 3rd, 2011 at 02:53am
  • Wasting Light

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    So touching (:
    January 3rd, 2011 at 02:24am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    aww :[
    January 3rd, 2011 at 12:20am
  • coast of maine.

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    Ahh, oh my gosh, realizationnnn.
    She and John need to be together, I changed my mind. </3
    January 2nd, 2011 at 09:24pm
  • xXxBethaneexXx

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    love it!(:
    omg dude, seriously there should be a sequel >.<
    January 2nd, 2011 at 08:22pm
  • drea_uhoh

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    you're writing is so unpredictable i love it!
    im not sure where the ending is going!
    and i can't wait.
    lol to john's black eye!
    January 2nd, 2011 at 08:04pm
  • BabyKakes

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    That was an amazing update :)
    January 2nd, 2011 at 06:40pm
  • itsahit

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    First of all, those last words of the chapter were gorgeous.
    I love that Chelsea beat John up and I loved Elena's conversation with her father. She has an amazing father, and I think knowing what happened between her parents allows her some guidance to what holds in the future for her and John. She has amazing friends, and a boy who messed up because he had the wrong information. I really hope that he can fix this.
    January 2nd, 2011 at 03:41pm
  • brucepayne

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    I am dead sad this is finishing but the fact that Chelsea beat the shit out of John was a nice little birthday present :L
    I really love this and it will be sorely missed (:
    January 2nd, 2011 at 01:29pm
  • dinugget

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    two?! :(
    i'm so sad it's going to end soon.
    sigh.
    anyway I hope John apologizes
    January 2nd, 2011 at 12:35pm
  • Arizona.Beauty.

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    that chapter was woaah! it was extremely meaningful(': update soon pleasee <3
    xoxox
    January 2nd, 2011 at 12:07pm
  • SpinningInCircles

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    She needs to forgive him!
    Update soon! :)
    January 2nd, 2011 at 10:18am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    aw it's ending soon =( thank YOU for being wonderful and writing!
    January 2nd, 2011 at 09:16am
  • megustajawno

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    Wow, this actually made me kind of teary-eyed. And that doesn't happen often. :D
    This is really one of the best stories I've ever read. Hoping for a reunion soon?
    I'll guess I'll just have to wait. (:
    January 2nd, 2011 at 08:56am
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