My Toxic Valentine - Comments

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Please update this?! <3

Oh my Jesus. I just read this entire thing and it was soooooo incredibly good but you haven't updated for 11 MONTHS?!?! Dude, not cool. Not cool at all. Please please please update soon.

I need an updatel, please dear this is just to good not to continue. I'll sell you my soul if you do!

I know it's almost been a year but this story is so good. I really like your writing and id live it if you update this story! Pleasseeeee

please update.

omg this story is amazing, i really wish you'd update :(

Just reread the entire thing, I hope you update soon :D

I really love this story! I can't believe I just started reading it! Update soon please!

Yay! I can't believe I nearly forgot about this story :DD
Can't wait for the next update!

WOW. About time I say. I've been waiting for so long.
Aww, I don't like Alex's dad but it's so nice that the charges where dropped. Update soon. :)

Yay! This was updated! I was so happy! (:
Loved the updated! Good thing he dropped the charges(:

ASDFGHJKL WHEN I SAW THERE WAS AN UPDATE OF THIS I FULL ON SCREAMED! My mom and dad looked at me like I was a freak ohmy god it's so awesome, you're so awesome. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T LEAVE FOR SO LONG AGAIN! I NEEEEED THIS STORY IN MY LIFE! <3

Yaaaaay finalllllllly

OHMYGOD THIS MADE ME SO HAPPYYYY! update again soooon!

Hi. Hi. Hello.
I am so adkvkjx wojhx about this story it's not even funny. :)
Here are some things I loved:
The thing when he said he gave a whole new meaning to the term Jacking off. I died a little on the inside. That was just perfect.
“Dude, you did not just ‘Robert’ me.” That made me laugh so hard for no reason. It was just awesome. It made me love you. Haha
“I'm kinda slutty when I'm drunk.” Just adksjhx. :D
"I can't walk around naked.” “You could,” Alex interjected “I really wouldn't mind.” That just made me giggle and smile. It was cute.
"Rian grinned and Jack could've sworn the sun was directly reflecting off his teeth." I literally screamed, "Right?? They're white!" when I read this and did this flashy motion with my hands. His teeth bro, I just don't even know.

So yeah. I think I love this. :)
I just really like the way you write. And you throw in all of these cute funny things and I just giggle and laugh and decide I love you every time. Haha
But not in a creepy way. :)

Oh, and he's pressing charges?? What a little cunt! If I could, I beat the shit outta that little bitch. Fucking pressing charges. Pssht!

Oh, and I'm definitely subscribing, by the way. I don't subscribe to many stories anymore. ;)

xox

update sooonn!!

Love this story! It's written quite well and I think it captures the characters well. Btw, I'd love to "see" them play the nervous game ;)

oh my god! I hope you update soon, I'm so in love with this story, I'll marry it in a heartbeat.
much love and respect for the talent mate.

OH MY GOD CHAPTER 17 IS LIKE AAAAAAAAAAHH...
I totally squealed you sly fox that was, I don't even know how to put it, I loved that conversation so much, hahaha xD