My Toxic Valentine - Comments

UPDATE. PLEASE.

It's really hard to imagine Jack as homeless, but MORE, PLEASE. :)

Don't stop writing this!!! =O I love it!
I'd like to find out more about Jack's past. And I'd like Jack joining the band ^^
I can't wait for more! =D

Haha! Was Jack a whore!?
And power to you Alex, get his ass to stay in B-More (only say that if you're actually from Maryland)
I loved it, can't wait for more~!

I don't understand why this isn't getting more feedback! It's a really good story. It's not your typical Jalex one! I really really like it and thought this chapter was great! At least Jack has found some kindness in strangers and an incentive to stay around...

Can't wait for more!!

Awe, yay! I'm so excited.

AWWWW So cute~!
Alex is so nice!
Can't wait for more

Finally! They meet! I loved the chapter so shush.
Update soon!

=] They've met eachother! I wonder where this will go =]

I like! =] More soon?

Ooh, this seems like it's gonna be seriously awesome xD
update soon? *Begs* :D

I like how you started it :]
Please update?

Wow!! This is good and original too which is a plus!!

I can't wait to see where you take this! I've never read a Jalex like this before.

I really like this and I can't wait for the next chapter!
<3 update soon

Its really good, =) well done and keep going
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Great start out!! I like it a lot!
I can't wait to see what going to happen and find out why Jack's homeless