House of the Damned - Comments

Amazing chapter, as usual. :wink:
Normally I have a way of writing comments by going in a specific order of my own (telling how much I like it, commenting on what happened in the story, and then going in grammar, if necessary.) But my drowsiness is causing me to lack doing that tonight, so I'll just go in the way of the chapter (if that makes any sense. :XD)

Then again, it she might not believe it. Amanda believed in just about everything—ghosts, aliens, werewolves, the whole nine yards. But even so…

I kind of had to reread this sentence a few times to understand it. I think you accidentally added the "it". :wink:

But, oh my Brian Kinney, what are the "red lights"? :omfg:
I need to know! :cheese:

I adore this story =)

I love this story. I wonder what is going to happen next. Update as soon as you can!

The next letter’s handwriting had changed. Instead of the delicate, smooth letters of the first two, this one seemed more slanted and jagged—as though she was hurrying to make her pen keep up with her rushing thoughts.

I really liked how you described that. XD It totally reminds me of me when I get a good sentence or a good story idea and I totally don't want to forget it

I think she does have a right to know what happened to her brother, though. But I can only wonder: will she believe it? O.O

“Do you think she have a right to know what happened to him?”

I had to kind of reread this sentence a few times. Did you mean has, instead?

Update when you can, please <3

Loved the update :)

OH MY GOD!!! PLEASE CONTINUE TENSION! SO MUCH TENSION! SUSPENCE!!! ARRGGHHH!! HURRY UP AND UPDATE!

This story is amazing! Your seriously a genius :)

What's going to happen next? O.O

Update when you can, please <333

Ahh, poor Amanda : [

Update when you can, please <333

Uh-oh, she's totally dead :(

Update when you can, please <333

OMG! CONTINUE!

OMG! CONTINUE!

I loved it.<3
More would be wonderful.

YOU. HAVE. TO. CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS IS BY FAR THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ ON HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
YOU MUST CONTINUE!!!!!! I HAVE TO READ THE REST!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love the way this story is going :D
Wonder what's going to happen next o.O

Update when you can, please <333

Oh my sweet baby Jesus.
This is one of my favorite stories on Mibba, my heart flutters when I see it on the updates screen and my fingers can't click fast enough to get to the page.

Truly stunning piece of writing this is mate. House of the Damned needs to be completed, if only just for me! Love it to death. I am subscribing so I know when you put any more up.

Chapter 7

“Dunno,” he shrugged. “It’s…nice, I guess, to be able to talk to someone. And if you die, do it here, okay? It gets kind of lonely.”

Awwww, bless! What a great line to end a chapter on. I really do love this story.

Chapter 5: Confronting A Nightmare

Wow, wow, wow! Sorry I haven't read this for a while, but what a chapter to come back to. I've fallen in love with this story all over again. It's extremely well written, original and unique. I feel like I'm the one who's found Frank that's how well it's written. You've conveyed the supernatural so well in this story. I honestly cannot say anything remotely bad about this!

Love ya

Awesome story, it's coming out really well. =]