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  • HystericxBarbie

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    Wow, that was sad.
    Though it's interesting to see a kid die for once in a horror story [if you know what I mean . . .]

    Update when you can, please <333
    May 7th, 2008 at 02:09am
  • HystericxBarbie

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    Wow, I'm seriously on edge of this story now! Who screamed and why?

    Updated when you can, please <333
    April 26th, 2008 at 07:48am
  • calling all creeps.

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    Psycho bitch ghost!
    :O
    April 6th, 2008 at 07:02am
  • HystericxBarbie

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    Who's the woman?
    I'm loving this story, BTW : ]

    Update when you can, please <33
    April 6th, 2008 at 05:56am
  • EuphoricTragedies

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    Ohhh this story is thrilling, I love it ;D.

    Keep it up haha.
    I've got chills! ;D
    April 6th, 2008 at 05:46am
  • Dreaming in Color

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    this is a kick ass story! Way to put a twist of the average fan fic! Can't wait for more!

    (Kill off Elise for me? Maybe?)

    <3 Fisher
    April 4th, 2008 at 05:49pm
  • calling all creeps.

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    I love this story.
    I think someone needs to die sooonnn. [:
    March 29th, 2008 at 07:47pm
  • Expo

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    I love this.
    I love the description.
    It was amazing.
    Keep it up.
    Thank you for commenting honestly.
    March 29th, 2008 at 06:56pm
  • calling all creeps.

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    Loved the update,[:
    I absolutely can't wait for more.
    March 17th, 2008 at 12:23am
  • HystericxBarbie

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    Why does she have a look of guilt on her face? O.o
    Love this story. (I find it hard to find many good horror stories on here)
    Update when you can <33
    March 15th, 2008 at 10:23pm
  • calling all creeps.

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    Hm, internet + MCR
    I vote she finds mibba!
    March 4th, 2008 at 02:52am
  • HystericxBarbie

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    Great chapter, wonder what she's gonna read next about Frank
    Update when you can ^.^
    <333
    March 3rd, 2008 at 02:54am
  • calling all creeps.

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    I find the story line extremely original.
    I'd love to see more soon, seeing as how you haven't updated in a while     :roll:
    March 2nd, 2008 at 02:45am
  • ofnothingness

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    this is really good! great work!
    February 18th, 2008 at 04:54pm
  • HystericxBarbie

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    This is getting really good Clap Clap Clap
    The Elise girl is a bitch >.<
    Update soon please, I really wanna know what's gonna happen next Nyam
    February 17th, 2008 at 01:37am
  • HystericxBarbie

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    I can't believe I haven't commented this yet >.<
    I love this story so far. It's written very well, I like it : ]
    Update when you can, please?
    February 14th, 2008 at 04:09am
  • Geekey

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    Loved the update!
    Aw, if she does die it would be nice for her to die in Frank's room.
    I'd move out of the room I was staying in and into his if I were her.
    February 4th, 2008 at 01:54am
  • neverland.

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    Overall I enjoyed the chapters I read, chapters 4 and 5.

    I felt a couple of sentences were a little blunt, but the mystery behind chapter 4 was good.

    Clink.

    It sounded like a…chain? But why…?

    Clinkclinkclink.

    I like the imagery here, the idea that the reader can hear the sound of the chains.

    Chapter 5, I felt, could have done with a little more build up at the beginning of the chapter. However, you had some nice descriptions going. I like the way that everyone else thinks that the main character is hallucinating rather than everyone believing her.

    My favourite part of that chapter was this line:

    Arteries and veins dangled like vines from the biggest parts.

    I love the way you describe the arteries and veins as vines. That whole sentence makes me feel sick almost just from the image it gave me.

    So, as I said, overall I liked this story. Keep going.
    January 9th, 2008 at 02:31pm
  • Modern Myth

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    Great Story
    Omg, Poor Frankie....:(
    January 7th, 2008 at 08:00am
  • MCRLUCY

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    What a fantastic story. Very well written and has put the wind up me for the night. Thanks for scaring me. I love it so far and cannot wait to read more.
    January 6th, 2008 at 07:42am
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