Shattered Secrets - Comments

Not constructive nor is it criticism but this has got to be my favorite story on Mibba right now.

Awe.
The way you're writing Brian makes me fall in love with him even more, and makes me hope that underneath the rockstar layer, that he's really sweet and could be a daddy one day.

she cannot take away brian from the poor boy! i dont care about michelle! come on now, look at your son and what your doing to him!!!! psshhh everybody knows that brian so wants her. now stop that nonsense and call the man.

awww they can't not see Bri anymore =|
but this is getting interesting....UPATE AGAIN! lol :P

I love your story, it's amazing!

I can't wait for an update, which I hope is soon (:

Hope you feel better! :D

well i absolutely love that her dad was on her side, it makes me happy to see a family sticking together. now, you need to get better, and dont worry, i know it sucks, but it'll be over soon. [:

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Your story is awesome.
I cant stop reading it.
Hopefully your tooth starts feeling better and they will give you something to help.
I have the same phobia!
Get some rest!!

Novacaine is fun, just don't gnaw off your tongue, okay. ^-^
Brian is sexier in person. My god... that man. -____-

Wow Brian, way to not be kind of obvious? xD
I was actually... sad? That Brian left her hose?
Yea... :D

Amazing. I woke up to 3 updates on this story, and I'm still not satisfied. I need more. Hahahah.
I loved it though, loved the sex scene, despite it not being full on...I loved it.
Bronx is so god damn adorable. :P
More soon.!

God damn children, seeing more then you want to realize!
Nah, actually, she should listen to her smart child and kidnap Brian from Michelle?
I feel bad for Michelle. Everyone wishes to get rid of her. xD

im on 20 right now..but i thought id let you know that earlier in your story you had Nissa write down her address for Brian when she gave him her number then in 20 had her glare at her kid because he told Brian the address over the phone. when Brian already supposedly had it already from Nissa.

I've noticed this problem in other peoples stories too, gotta keep the facts straight all through out the story.
But i do love your story and can't wait to keep reading till the end! =)

A child's innocence to everything...
that about made me cry when Bronx said but you love him mommy.
Broke my heart, and even Bronx can see it.

oh I love it! its so great. I love how there relationship is progressing!!!! :]

this story is epically awesome in my point of view. I found it today & i must say that i LOVE it! :D bronx is the cutest kid EVER! ^...^ update soon please.

It was really good, I promise.
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I really like seeing the different sides of Brian.

I absolutely, fucking adore this story.
Definitely one of my favorites. I get so excited when I see the little email from Mibba, with this stories title in it. Makes me scream.
It's always full of surprises, and I can never, ever wait until the next chapter. I hate waiting.
So update soon, this story is my drug. Haha.
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ohhh snappp! lmfao XD

wow, definitely did not see that coming whatsoever! well hmmm. i wonder whats going to happen. with michelle and such o.0

now, that greg's outta the way, all we need is michelle to disappear and all will be well!