Annoyed the Ice Until It Melted - Comments

  • Carry On Winchester

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    I love the mature side of Maddy, how she can be so nice and compassionate to Neville is great. Neville is my favorite next to Malfoy, of course :) haha. I loved the chapter. You really are a good writer, the dialogue is nice and there's a fair amount of description.
    October 29th, 2010 at 12:21pm
  • Blessedelua

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    awwwwwwww poor Nev! (Yes I'm abbreviating because I'm a lazy ass -.-) I wanna hug him too!
    And what's with the first year! This shiz is gonna get good! -grabs popcorn-
    I can't wait for the next chapter!
    (And I can't think of any critiques ^^)
    October 29th, 2010 at 07:15am
  • icet94

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    This is amazing. I really like this story so far
    October 29th, 2010 at 06:42am
  • icet94

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    This is amazing. I really like this story so far
    October 29th, 2010 at 06:42am
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    four: Really wishing that they had been able to jinx their classmates. Loved the sneak peek and can't wait to read that. Great descriptions too. Can't wait for next Thursday.
    October 25th, 2010 at 05:33am
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    three: What a great way to start off a chapter; having a prank described first. Although, I will say I liked the prank that was pulled on the guys more. The rest of the chapter was excellent as well. Wondering what's going to happen next?
    October 25th, 2010 at 04:54am
  • Blessedelua

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    Yay updates! I loved that they both fell over and she tried to kick him in the head XD
    October 25th, 2010 at 04:48am
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    two: Not as funny as the first, but still had some great parts. Wondering what's going to happen for the new school year? Any good pranks? Can't wait to read them.
    October 25th, 2010 at 04:30am
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    Okay, this awesomely hilarious story only has 19 comments so far; well, it's about to get more. Great descriptions. Loved EVERY single hilarious part that was written; favorite would have to be what the sorting hat said when it was placed on her head. Wondering what pranks will be done? Can't wait to read and find out.
    October 25th, 2010 at 04:23am
  • bff.till.life

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    I love the preview you put on there!
    Now I really can't wait for the next chapter!
    I think you should update more often though
    Like say Monday and Thursday?
    I would be so happy :]
    October 25th, 2010 at 02:27am
  • Carry On Winchester

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    this was so entertaining omg. I love it! More soon, yeah?
    October 24th, 2010 at 11:21am
  • Annie_Weasley

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    So awesome! I laughed so hard I almost fell outa my seat! Keep writing! :D
    October 23rd, 2010 at 03:55am
  • Dulcis Somnium

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    Haha, definitely kept me laughing. Especially when she called it a tail. It was so cute and original. Not a lot of people write about the wizards' complete lack of knowledge about the muggle world, so it was well done. ^_^
    October 22nd, 2010 at 04:59am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    I really like this story, It's very amusing.
    October 22nd, 2010 at 03:06am
  • Ebii-La

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    haha xD
    I kinda sorta really freaking love this :3
    it's so cute and funny
    October 20th, 2010 at 01:43am
  • bff.till.life

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    Love it haha! Its so cute!
    I love how Maddy is kinda hyper
    Also that she loves to pulls pranks
    Thats always fun to read :] anywaysss
    Cant wait for more :D
    October 16th, 2010 at 09:04pm
  • broken wings;

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    i love it! totally different from other draco love stories!
    October 15th, 2010 at 07:41pm
  • Blessedelua

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    XD I love this story! It is complete genius!
    I can't wait to read more!
    October 15th, 2010 at 08:14am
  • icet94

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    I love this! It seems really good!
    October 15th, 2010 at 05:36am
  • fairygurl_4

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    Great chapter

    :)
    October 15th, 2010 at 12:56am