Bluewood - Comments

I am fascinated by Sunny's character. I am totally hooked by this story. I have never seen a story like this before. It's very unique and captivating. I love it.

i like this a lot
i'm obsessed with sunny's character

I really like this; I think it's interesting and original and rather well-written. Sometimes the phrasing feels a bit awkward, doesn't entirely make sense, but that's probably intentional because it fits with the style of narration you've got going on, so.

The thing is, I kind of really, really like Sunny. And I'm not too fond of Marbie. It's weird, because by all rights I should like Marbie, she's the kind of character I normally like, but I just don't. I think Sunny's pretty cool, and I like that she doesn't seem to care what anyone thinks of her and is sort of laid back all the time. I don't know, I just like her.

Anyway, yeah. I really, really like this, I think it's awesome. :)

Keep!

This is pretty neat.
The chapters are a bit short but I think it works.
Looking forward to the updates :)

I like this chapter
I like this story in general
there's just something about it
I can't put my finger on it
but
its just
it makes this story RLY good

haha omg! I love it when he said "You know i hate tomatoes" - i do too.
I'm so glad i came across this story.
can't wait for more!! :D

I'm excited to read chapter two :)
I like how she is like pretty, and can get her way
but she's not like a whore about it, i do like that
Oh, the main character is feisty there haha
I want to know more about this person, I don't even know the gender :/
and, Sunny is in there :)
she is an interesting character, but only because I don't know more about her
which makes her more mystertious, which means I want to read more :)
I'm curious to why she doesn't have any friends
if she's said to be like really persuasive, and she seems nice
Oh, okay so it's name is Asher. but that's a boy and a girl's name so i still dont know! haha
anyway, this was lovely just as the first was :) good job!

I am absolutely in love with this layout, it's absolutely gorgeous. I'd do just about anything to be able to make layouts like that! It's gorgeous, we'll leave it at that :).

Is a sunny bluewood like a tree or something? It kind of seems like it, but I dont know
Wow, I'm a dipshit, no lie, it's her name xD I'm sorry about that
But, I like how she explains the teacher and like the everyday school life thing
teachers really are that lazy too haha
Wait, why is she gone? A whole month out of school, wtf?
I really like this, though I kind of was confused about some parts,
It was still good. I love the simplicity of your writing,
it flows very well together, and it's just very pretty :)
defenitly a keeper, great job!

sunny is intrestig
idk what to think of her
but I can't wait for more

Okay, so I was being a jerk and not commenting on the update because I was too lazy, even though I read this when the chapter was first posted. I really like the authenticity of these characters. Even though Sunny is a bit, rough around the edges, I like her. I prefer characters like this, more tasteful and spunky. I really can't wait to see where this is going to go. :) Update soon.

I think I ended on chapter 3 last time. Yeah, I think that's about right xD Anyways, I really like this chapter. It's hysterical - especially how Asher mentions how he's not a geek who pees his pants or a broody, cocky bastard xD Snort! No lie, this line made me laugh: You see, that smile of hers is disarming, and I know you’re probably sick of hearing crap about her pearly whites, but this is my story—and you listen to my pathetic shit. Asher, you silly person, you xD I also love how quirky Sunny is. And she's drunk, lol! I happen to think that the ending was perfect, the icing on this totally quirky cake xD
Anyways, like I said, this chapter was amazing, possibly my favorite. I'm gonna read the rest when I get the rime (: <3

Lol, cut me off.

Asher's funny and adorable. Yeah, that's all.

Lol, cut me off.

Asher's funny and adorable. Yeah, that's all.

As a reader, I really do like Sunny. She's mysterious, but not overly so. I like that she's not drop dead gorgeous, but not awkward and clumsy like others make them to be. But I can sense that she's a manipulative person.

I love Asher, h

Great update :D
I have to say that Sunny is unpredictable to me sometimes..like i really never know what her real motivates are..she really intrigues me as a character but in real life I probably wouldn't like her.

Yes I love Sunny Bluewood!

God! She's amazing! It's Marbie that's annoying this shit out of me! Gah if she likes Asher she should just COME OUT AND SAY IT ALREADY.

it's great to read an Australian writer.
I'd like to see where this could go :D
Keep it :)

And yes, I'm Australian, from Victoria :D

Haha, I see you mentioned St Leonard's.
My real life friend goes there.
xD

And anyway, I like the sound of the story. Sunny sounds super ordinary yet mysterious and intriguing and Asher sounds like a doofus, but kind of quirky.
:)