Bluewood - Comments

I love Asher and his dorkiness. please update?

so far, I am absolutely entranced by this story. Sunny is very intriguing and I love the way that you write Asher's thoughts. They have insight and creativity in a boy's brain. I am hooked, completely.

Ugh. I'm just going to leave a pathetic comments saying this story's awesome. I'm so uncool. c:
I like Marbie, actually. Sunny reminds me of someone horrifyingly similar in real life. Asher is cool.

So... I haven't commented in a long time. Jesus. If it makes you feel better, you can send me a virtual whack on the face. :) Um. So, the new layout is just... awesome beyond words. So... well. I can't think of much to say/write. I mean, I abso-fucking-lutely adore your stories, though I haven't the time to read all the updates 'cos I'm falling behind in school. Ugh. I think I like chapter seven the most in this story. It's like Asher's slowly breaking Sunny down. And I don't quite like Marbie. Jay sounds cool 'cos he plays the games that I almost never but sometimes play. XD It would be funny if the next time he mentions a game it's something like Plants vs. Zombies, haha. Anyway, I love how Sunny says she's farting sunshine. Um yeah. Well, that's the end of this lame-ass comment. :3

Great chapter! Keep updating, I can't wait!

I hate starting story comments, it's so awkward and I have no idea how to begin what I want to say without sounding like a total idiot, so I'm just going to start off with a safe I really like your layout, it's pretty.

I guess I'll start off with Sunny's character, since she's the one this entire thing mostly revolves around. I like her, personally, but then yet again I don't. Her personality is one that draws people in, she's got that I don't give a shit sort of thing to her that makes me want to make her give a shit, aha that sounds weird. But really, she's so damn mysterious and it's like even I could understand why he wanted her approval so much, or why everyone does, she's just got that... thing about her. And it's weird because even reading the story, even I can't exactly put my finger on what it is, but she's just so interesting. And I've never even met her! :D
Well, actually, I don't really like her as much as she just really makes me want to read more of her. I think that sums it up perfectly. She does have her moments though, I'll admit.

I think my favourite part was when you described how that smile got her everything, I don't know, that part just sort of stuck in my head.

I do like Marbie though, she's someone who I find myself instantly finding myself want to hear more of. She's got that spunky sort of attitude, which is sort of the exact opposite of Sunny I guess, aha. I like how relazed she is with Ash that she isn't scared to push him and yell at him and give him the slap in the face he needs- she really compliments his character well I think. They fit really well in the entire best friend sort of thing. I'm definitely looking forward to more of her

And Ash is really likable too, no worries. He has this contradicting personality that makes me smile. It's like he's trying to convince himself that he's all no worries and cool, but you can really tell that he honestly does care what people think. He's got that awkward sort of thing to him- especially when he was making faces at the girl who was so blatently flirting with him- that makes me want to just hug him until dawn comes. He's so damn adorable, and yet I feel like that would be the last thing he wants to be. I like the unique-ness of his hair too, I've never read about a kid with Ronald McDonald hair before, I really like that.

And his mom is just awesome, nuff said, she watched Pirates of the Carribean.

Even though the story is about Sunny, I really like that it doesn't only revolve around her. We get a feel of more of his life, what he's like, and it's not like she's suddenly going to become a giant part of it. I really like that, and how even though he's so infatuated with her this new girl is coming in, she really makes me wonder.

Anyways, I really do like this story, IF YOU COULD NOT TELL, and it's awesome so yeah.
:D

damn
seems like shte bout to go down
can't wait for moreee

God, I love this story.

This story is so different, I really like it :)
I'm going to say that you're from Melbourne, although I could be wrong. I really want to see what happens on this date because I'm from a privet school, and I'm pretty sure I'm not a snob. Not all of us are. So I really want to see how you portray this girl.

I seriously adore this. You have such a witty writing style, and I'm really glad that I watched Misfits because I have a feeling I'd be sitting here like...'wtf is a slag?' BUT I KNOW! Anywho, great update. :)

i love this story.

GET YOUR ASHER TOUCH BACK.

now.

and don't come back until you have it.

Great update :)
Oo I think sunny might be jealous

Dayumn. How did this story get so many comments and subscribers in a short period of time? I'm hooked already~ Subscribing, update soon <3

dear god, i loved it so much

Very quirky and original. Love the tone and the characters are all very interesting. Asher is my favourite character, so funny. I love how this story feels real. The characters are relatable and I got to say that your layout and banner are just lovely.

I like Sunny...
She reminds me of someone... I don't know who. But she does and I enjoy it.

I like Sunny...
She reminds me of someone... I don't know who. But she does and I enjoy it.

So, I really like this story. I love the humor and the quick-witted writing. I also love the pace of it. It moves along very quickly but not much has happened. I don't know, I'm quite fond of this and I shall certainly be reccing it in the story reccing thread. :) It's an excellent read and just...plain brilliant. I love that it's in a male's point of view, and I just love the terminology. I also adore the fact that Sunny isn't some shy girl that he's thinking of conquesting and blah blah blah. It's wonderful, is all. :)

Now this, this is just amazing, brilliant, fantastic. I was absolutely fascinated. This is so realistic and there's always that humour you add in that makes it all wonderful. It's absolutely great. Subscribed.

I love it, & congratulations on the Project Fiction nomination.

This story is magnificent.