Booze, Bongs and Boobs. - Comments

I'll admit, it isn't the first time I've seen this idea and it was a little cliché,
but it was quite readable and the layout was good (:

MAUHAHA!
I loved the ending, to chapter one! It actually made me laugh; all, what the fuck?!
Any ways -
The writing was brillitant, though I saw some run on sentences, or places where a comma should be.

Examples

“Mom how much longer?" There should be a comma after mom.
Florida isn’t exactly what all the postcards propose it to be, there weren’t any sandy beaches ... After be, there should be a period. Just doesn't flow right, for me.

Well - I hope this comment helped. :D Good story. I'm subscribing - now, off to read the next chapters!

dude update soon plz!!!!!!!

aww do you keep reposting the same chapter to tear away my excitement?? ): REALLY update soon thank youu

good up date :) but you should update more oftan i had to read it over agian for got what it was about

I'd love to see another update! Love your story!

Even though it's cliche, (the whole 'I'm a girl at a boy's boarding school' and I've never heard of it in real life, you manage to pull it off with your writing style. I like this girls attitude and her obvious distaste towards Florida and her parents. It's easy to relate to and you're doing a great job of bringing the All American teenager out in this. Not to mention, nice title.xD

I know, I asked them to but a hooka there, due to the illegal issue.

Whoever made the banner for this story, the picture under "bongs" is inaccurate. That is a hookah not a bong. There is a deference. Hookahs are legal. Bongs are not.

This is good :) It sucks that it's only three chapters though

hi im ur newest subscriber :) U got a nice story going, dont let it go to a waste :)

I can't wait to read more. :)

This is a really interesting story..I can't wait to read more of it soon. :)

best girl goes to boys boarding school story I've read! I like how you made her family more famous, it makes her attitude make more sense. I'm subscribing...

I have a very busy life right now. I am graduating high school and my AP classes are building up on me and I have many deadlines for college. I am sorry, it will be updated.

I really like this story but you stopped writing it out of nowhere... Is it going to continue or what? I'd really like for it to continue...

Really really great keep up the good work and update!!

This story is great so far! :D
But try to avoid changing tenses so often (i.e from past to present, and vice versa, and stick to just one tense.
Other than that, it's really good and I'll be looking forward to reading the next chapter! xD
-Michelle

Ohh i really like this story :) Updates please

Update soon! Really likes it!! :P