Id hate to be the hypocrite here wne Im trying to be the pacifist, but wow........mibba really has gone down a hell of a lot since I joined......I wonder whta happened.
And by the way....No I dont like your story. And Dont flame me for it because Im intitled to an opinion and You as an author should be open to critizism. Ever Try Originality? Because at least Im being nice about it, or trying to.