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  • DeirdreMac123

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    I believe their relationship moved too quickly and her reaction to him after him raping her is completely inaccurate. Otherwise I like the story.
    February 6th, 2011 at 05:14pm
  • ZombieToast

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    She probs should run...
    February 5th, 2011 at 06:34pm
  • fatendestinny

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    omg! what an idiot! why'd she get outta that dang car?!! haha <3 it!
    February 5th, 2011 at 03:30pm
  • ilovehappiness

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    Anna is super stupid in chapter 20..
    Why would she get out of the car and walk?
    That's worse than waiting in the car.. but I guess we need it for the story to move.
    February 5th, 2011 at 07:33am
  • horseychick4life

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    love itttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!
    February 2nd, 2011 at 01:22am
  • itzxmeh

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    this story makes me laugh.. like alot.
    December 27th, 2010 at 02:53am
  • AlanahAmazing

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    more please (:
    December 23rd, 2010 at 04:58am
  • micheahn96

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    Ahhhhh I love it. PLEASE write more!!!!
    December 18th, 2010 at 04:30am
  • MakeCupcakesNotWar!

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    awe soo short please uppdaattee soonn! but i still la la la love it!(= te-he
    December 17th, 2010 at 10:45pm
  • Lyrical Night

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    i love your story!! please update soon!XD
    December 17th, 2010 at 03:54pm
  • yourestellar

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    MERRY CHRISTMAS! :D
    December 17th, 2010 at 02:49pm
  • ZombieToast

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    lol
    love authors note
    December 17th, 2010 at 02:49pm
  • Plan To Live FoREVer

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    Yes...brothers do suck...i only have one i tell you..and he is whiny and manipultive....i swear this dude is ALWAYS gettn ish outta me....-stupid younger brother powers-...awwww this chapter was very short....i can't wait till you get your own laptop...this story is sooo awesome...update soon...!!!
    December 17th, 2010 at 02:09pm
  • Marauding Marlen

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    Absolutely loved it ahaha
    Update?
    please please please x 1,000 :DDD
    December 17th, 2010 at 04:17am
  • willy ;

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    update update update :D
    "I want you to moan my name" ? that dirty girl ;)

    haha, I love this :DDDDDDD
    ^^crack head face.
    December 12th, 2010 at 09:32pm
  • MakeCupcakesNotWar!

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    la la la love it hope you update
    December 8th, 2010 at 01:13am
  • amberBELA

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    I think the story's fun. :)
    December 1st, 2010 at 10:42am
  • yourestellar

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    update soon. (:
    i'm sure your school's not that bad.
    November 30th, 2010 at 02:47pm
  • FatimadeJ

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    yay you posted! aww sorry for your school, my school sucks too -.-
    loving the story!
    November 28th, 2010 at 01:01pm
  • you're_addicted

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    BEAUTIOUS <3333
    November 28th, 2010 at 07:22am
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