Anna is super stupid in chapter 20.. Why would she get out of the car and walk? That's worse than waiting in the car.. but I guess we need it for the story to move.
Yes...brothers do suck...i only have one i tell you..and he is whiny and manipultive....i swear this dude is ALWAYS gettn ish outta me....-stupid younger brother powers-...awwww this chapter was very short....i can't wait till you get your own laptop...this story is sooo awesome...update soon...!!!