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Kinda hot ;]

yay for updates(:

LOVEEEEE IT!
<3

Bleck...stupid school and ppl at stupid school...the weirdness is what makes me happy... XD .....i wondr wat'll happen nxt...plz update soon...!!!

I like it, I love it, I want some more of it :DDD
Next chapter pleaseeeeeeeee :DDD

love it!
i got a quisten,how old is she
sorry i forgot &am to lazy to go back
update soon

XD

OM DAMN!
stupid derrek! that's not how u treat a women!
it's about time u update! lolz ;)
i cn't wait for the nxt chptr... i can sense the passion coming on ahaha ^^

i am in love with this story. by the time it made stomach feel al twisty and me wanting to read more, there werent anymore chapters.. ): please write more. and dude, derek's bipolar but for the faccccct i love a few someones named derek, i must say i have to love him, for his name! lol. :D

<3
Awesome.

Love! please right more?

Still loving it. Everything about it, ahah update soon? :D

Love it(: Update?

ahahah, please update soon (:
i miss you and this story hun <3

well, I'm finally commenting! I love it, really, I do. It has the perfect mixture of romance, action and comedy. I really do enjoy reading her thoughts, because they're so typical for someone like her. I honestly think like that too. I look forward to seeing what happens next and I'll def. be commenting<3

Love the new layout. :D

Ha....my friends place....i would've asked the same question....this story randomness makes me smile..!!!

yay u updated!
lolz wat a stupid name.. "my friends place" :)
i hope their little date goes well!
cn't wait till the nxt chptr!

LOVE it pleaseees uhpdate :)

haha, "y friends place". very funny XD

i like your new layout.. not that i didn't like the one before; that one was awesome too. update soon? (: oh, and i'm sorry you have writer's block. that must suck butt.