Aw Luqualis is really kind! I mean he is making her feel comfortable, waiting until she is rested up so discuss her main reason being there. And she met two of his friends too! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow. just.... wow. I like it. you're really able to connect the reader to the story and that's something not a lot of authors are able to do. I think there were like, one or two grammer or spelling errors but other then that I saw nothing wrong.
YAY she finally out of that horrid place!!!!!!! I can't wait for that bastard to get what is coming to him!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow isn't she suppose to be another vampire's blood donor? Man that dude is one heartless man, beating her and drinking from her until she almost passed out. PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 XD
I don't think I've ever read a story on here that was A) About vampires B) as interesting -- it hooked me from the intro, not even the first chapter! C) So well WRITTEN, with the drama, the comedy, the mix of detail and dialogue so it doesn't get boring... and very creative names, by the way. I like it. D) 2 chapters and I'm completely in love. I shall now need this like a.... girl needs chocolate and ice cream. and that's saying something.
Please update. This was absolutely, positively, breathtakingly AMAZING.
Awwwh that almost made me cry when she was saying goodbye to everyone. :/ Poor girl, and her poor family. :/ But hopefully everything will work out :D Update soon ^^
I mean he is making her feel comfortable, waiting until she is rested up so discuss her main reason being there.
And she met two of his friends too!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!