The Vampire's Mistress - Comments

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:hearts: lots of hearts..... lots and lots of hearts. ^^ course I'm a sucker for well written vampire stories... Twilight not being on that list for me... :hearts:

I'm liking this. Alot.

I can't wait to read more.

The plot sounds brilliant, and I love your vision of the end of the world. I really look forward to seeing how it develops.

I like this a lot so far c:
The layout makes the story seem less enjoyable though...
Your story's plot is very interesting though, and I can't wait to read more! ^^
I'm definitely subscribing.

i really like this story so far plz update soon :)

This is reaaaally goood.
Update soon please<3 :')

First Impression; the layout was a little too dark for my taste. ):
Even though it is a vampire story, I'm noticing, it hurts my eyes to focus on the color scheme, aha.

I love this so far, mostly because I can relate to it. I use the word 'shiz' alot. :D
<3

“Yes, but I personally prefer the term homo vamperious."
Even though it probably wasn't supposed to be funny, this line made me crack up, aha.
<3

I liked this. The balance between a good amount of speech and detail was maintained. :) There weren't too many spelling/grammar errors and the only ones I did see where probably just hallucinations brought on my tired eyes, aha.

I wish I could've been surprised by the ending of this first chapter, though. Even though I was reading the build-up, I knew he'd be an 'x-blood' aha.

Nice job. :)

OHMYGODDD. I love it<3
teehee write more :D

YAY!! finally! I love it, now get to WORK!

JENNY!!! Get this story up and running before i have to kick your butt!!!!