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I just read thewhole story. I love howfast pace it is. James is adorable and the cliff hangers are perfectly written. Awesome job! Keep up the good work :)

LOVE IT!! Can't wait for next chapter!!

:'(
I want more! D:
Can you update for my birthday tommorrow?!
Pwety pwease, I'll lov you foREVer?
:')

I freakin loved it!!! amazing!! update soon!!!

good to hear that zack is gonna be okay, and that nothing to major is going to happen to brian and matt

This is an amazing story!
You are a great writer!

I love this story. :)

zack's going to be okay, he's a strong guy and a bullet won't stop him

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! Stupid skylar I hate him he shot zacky and then matt and them could go to jail but it should be skylar...ahhh more now please

what a kick ass cliffhanger!! And I don't hate you well not too much anyways but update like asap. Amazing chapter, keep up the good writing!!!

this is amazing.. love it!

I hate to sound like a total fan girl but.... O.M.G!!!!!! I just found this story and I flippin love it... please wait date soon... I don't care if I have to comment ten times in a row I will. This story is amazing.... More Soon please?!?

OhmyfuckingGAWD!!!! How can you just stop there?!? Grrrrr! That was mean and intelegent at the same time!!!
That was a good one though. I've never read anything like this so far, so its unique for me ^_^
Can't wait for the next update :)

okay his ass better die!!! no one hits james and gets away with it...though that dick having a gun i saw coming. He kidnapped a kid, he had to know the guys would come after him

Zacky. Nooooo. D:

I'm in love with this story.

Holy shit. I legit made a D: face at the end of that chapter.

loved it!!!!

chamaleontea- yeah. im just that good! XD
lol. umm i do have to agree with you, skylar is in fact ROYALLY FUCKED UP THE ASS!
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and yeah i wanna freakin like kill a non existant person... oh and skylars gonna go down! his lil white ass is grass! XD

chamaleontea- yeah. im just that good! XD
lol. umm i do have to agree with you, skylar is in fact ROYALLY FUCKED UP THE ASS!
>> << ^^ vv
and yeah i wanna freakin like kill a non existant person... oh and skylars gonna go down! his lil white ass is grass! XD

holy freakin moly, that was the cliffhanger to end all cliffhangers!! I hope that zacky and move his butt out of the way fast. Hopefully you get a lot of comments so you'll keep updating or else I'll just have to keep commenting and then start harassing other people to comment. So hope you get lots and lots of nice comments. Amazing chapter, update soon!!