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  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Okay, I read the rest of it. =)

    I actually felt kinda bad for Gena, as weird as that is. But I'm so glad ZV and Trinity got together and are engaged. And I agree with Trinity, I hope she doesn't fuck it up, either. lol.

    I absolutely adored their outing at Disneyland. And how Johnny was honest and said "I just wanna go." lmao! That was great. Can't really blame the girls for getting pissed at the guys for getting wasted. I probably would have, too.

    I love this very much!!!!!!!!
    January 1st, 2011 at 11:10am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I read the first four chapters and I will definitely read more next time I'm on. Just gotta say that I love it so far....James is adorable!!!!!! The guys are amusing. lol. And Gena...wow. She's...well, you know the word I'm going to use. Poor Trinity. =(
    December 31st, 2010 at 09:45am
  • StacieIerogeance

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    i would have gone to that if I lived in california...no I did not know those things and that was pretty great how all those people and the guy who sang walk with them came...jimmy well always be remembered...that was a great chapter and I really can't wait for more...your authors note made me cry also
    December 31st, 2010 at 06:46am
  • MamaZ

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    awe james is so damn cute! and i wonder how zack is going to take gena being friends with his soon to be wife...and how will gena take the finger on her finger?
    December 30th, 2010 at 05:27pm
  • MamaZ

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    i so in love with this story!!! i so happy they are getting married, now matt just needs to get val prego
    December 27th, 2010 at 09:12am
  • SaveMe

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    i love the ending on this :D
    December 9th, 2010 at 11:26pm
  • PeanutFoREVer.

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    I do love your story, and that last chapter was uber cute. I couldn't help but notice that you keep writing 'purpose' when I think you mean 'propose' (: just thought I would point it out. Love your story though, it's excellent (:
    December 6th, 2010 at 02:22pm
  • Catastrophic

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    I just discovered this story and I am already freaking in love with it. Can't wait for the next update :]

    *subscribe*
    December 6th, 2010 at 09:10am
  • carelesswhispers

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    I'm in love with this story! :)
    December 6th, 2010 at 08:28am
  • IvySaint

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    nope i didnt see that coming, i thought they were gonna have sex....lmao but that was still amazing! love the ring, can't wait for more! hehe
    December 6th, 2010 at 06:42am
  • NormanBates.

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    Ah I really like this! Keep writing! :D
    November 26th, 2010 at 12:58pm
  • aPerfectForever

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    I just started reading it today and I love it! You're a very talented writer. Keep up the good work!!
    November 26th, 2010 at 10:34am
  • Perfect Exceeder

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    REVBULLL! OMG
    November 26th, 2010 at 10:20am
  • mistery gurl

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    loved it :]
    hmmm i dunno what could happen?
    November 26th, 2010 at 08:11am
  • mistery gurl

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    loved it, i think by moving in with zacky, it will strenghten their relationship, not ruin it :}
    November 17th, 2010 at 06:57am
  • SaveMe

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    Lol, it's a good thing ur fillers are good...
    Jking, but this story seriously makes me smile :)
    November 17th, 2010 at 02:29am
  • StacieIerogeance

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    i wouldnt be able to say to a cute little james, zacky adn brian giving me the puppy pout either its just craziness....yay see gena is being the bigger woman and trying to make things right which is good
    November 16th, 2010 at 07:30pm
  • ThereIsLove

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    still loving the story!
    I can't believe she just agreed to living with zachy, i really wonder whats gonna happen..xD
    please update really soon!
    November 16th, 2010 at 02:10pm
  • SaveMe

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    I love this story so far!!! please dont stop! D:

    You did a really good job with keeping the story up...it doesnt "sag" at all or get boring at random times...all good :)

    :3 lulz, zachy and jamie are adorablz
    November 9th, 2010 at 08:56pm
  • Ace.Spade

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    I really like this and I think you deserve so many more comments then you've got. Trinity is such a nice person, especially to people who are terrible to her like Gena :)

    I love the real life Gena though, just saying :)
    November 9th, 2010 at 01:46am