My World Went Black - Comments

all your other stories are awesome but i have a feeling that this might have been your first one? it was kind of hard to read. is english not your first language?

sad

Thank you very much.

i loved the ending!
fantastic x

Thank you so much. I'm working on several stories at the moment, but only two are chapter stories.

I don't know how to accurately describe how much I enjoyed reading this story. It was really interesting and different and the ending fit perfectly. I'm looking forward to the next story you have to post.

Yes in heaven and Zacky may finally be in peace.

OMG ACK-!!
BAD BRIAN!!
but they will see eacother again! <3

Hahaha yea. I decide to make it interesting there. I'm writing another Snacky that will be up sometime tomorrow and Brian actually nice in it. It will be very different from my other stuff.

My brain just went WTF!?! Seriously everything that just happened was because he lost a bet. The torture and murder because he lost a bet?! I feel so bad for Zack he's fallen for someone who is about to hurt him in the worst way imaginable.
On a side not...I think you have a thing for writing Evil Brian. I haven't seen it much but this is written so well that I can't help but like it.

Dudddeeee. Great update.

Thank you so much. Sadly no update tomorrow, because this next chapter is very hard to write. Their will be an update the first Sat in December.

awesome!!
this is really good! and i thought i comented on this before i guess i forgot....*pout*
oh well, i have now!!! update soon please x

Yea theres a few more chapters. The one thing I haven't explain yet and it's in the summary so I have to get into that part. I somewhat bought it up in this chapter but Ill give the readers the real truth in the upcoming chapter. Thank you so much for you heartfilled comments:)

Awww. And they have a happy ending. I find it funny that even though they have been through the most traumatic days of their lives Jimmy still tries to joke around and make everyone happy. And Steve finally screwed himself over literally because that is what happens to rapists in prison. I like the ending it brings the story to nice closure that doesn’t leave us guessing, but you could expand upon it if you felt the need to.

Thank you for pointing that out. Mibba wasn't working well when I was posting this mourning. Sorry for the early/late April Fools joke.

I like the idea of them burning down the house preferably with steve inside. Anyways this chapter went from very sweet to dark and ominous in no time flat and with such a smooth transition in between. I really hope they get away with most of their sanity intact.
On a different note. Is it just me or did chapter five get posted twice. It might just be a problem with the system.

I got very excited about the idea, but writing it was very hard and it didn't flow right.

2 or 3 would be interesting. :)
This is really good.
Steve is such a sick bastard.
>:P

Thank you very much. Your very right about Hailey death too. Ch. 5 is probably going to be the most epic chapter going to be the most intense chapter of this whole story.