Smile Like You Don't Give A Damn About the Consequence - Comments

LOVE YOU ALY!!!!! Sooooooo hi

I like this :)

I like it
and I hve to agree with you
this is definitely ur best chap so far

hey
so I read both chapters
first of all
u don't hve to put a random link in a chapter
you can just do this
[url=the link]the name[/url]
I'll pm u more bbcodes
and you don't hve to recap
thts rly just a waste of time
and I don't mean to be rude
and I don't wanna sound like I'm telling
you how to write ur story
but don't jump into the relationship right away ok?
cuz then you can like build up the emotions the characters hve towards each other
and get into more detail with the background info
but u don't hve to
it's just a suggestion
I like ur story
and the concept
it's rly good