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WOW. I love it. I love the emotions you bring to the reader. And the way you write. Just amazing. Please kindly update.

I really, honestly, don't know what to say.
Really, I don't. And I'm one for many words when it comes to MCR.
But wow, this story.....it feels like, like a treasured prize that's shined every day.
Oh, that's just lame. What I was meant to try and say, is I can clearly, and I mean very clearly, see how much time and effort you have actually put into this story. The way that you've thought of the right words and made them flow together so well in a short space. Because each of them chapter are quite short, but very much effective.
And I love them. The characters, they too have had so much care and thought put into them, that they feel like real people. That I'm not just reading this, that I'm seeing them.
I'm definitely sticking around for the end!

It is not often I will read a fanfiction, but I can see what you meant when you said this is a story you have worked and spent your time on, and I notice myself forgetting that Gerard is not one of your characters, but you just give him such a personality that goes well with how he is seen artistically. It is so extremely well written, I absolutely love your vocabulary choice, and the way you explain things tends to be so poetic. The only problem I have with the story is the literal emotional distress I feel from how well you portray your characters emotions. I hate and love Gerard all at once, and I cannot get enough of it.

Oh goodness this story is absolutely breath taking. I don't read much on here, just post my own stuff, but I saw your journals anout the banners and thought I'd check it out. Boy, I'm glad I did. I used to love fanfiction but then it got less and less creative, but this one is different. She's not a merch girl on tour, or them back in high school, or any of those cliches. You decribe every little detail perfectly and I've come close to tears quite a few times. It's heart breaking reading this and all I want is the best for the two of them. One thing that I love the most is that she has been able to trust again, she's dating again which is lovely and all but she is still thinking about Gerard. Everything is raw and real and I have to say that this is my favorite story on here.

Although I do not like reading stories with famous people in them, I really did enjoy this story. The way you wrote it, it seemed like both characters were original, instead of one character being the lead singer to MCR. Every part of this story is packed with so much emotion; it is absolutely awesome. Your style of writing seems so real, and it really adds to the story.

I love both the layout, and the banner. They are both equally beautiful. I did enjoy reading this, and I might stick around to the end.

I think I will always love this story. Haha. The way things are described make you actually feel for the characters.

This story has so much emotion in it and it's very well put together. It's sweet and you make the chapters really easy to read and keep up with. Awesome job!

<3

Oh lord, this is officially my favourite Gerard story of current and, from what I can remember, of past. You have a gorgeous style of writing; your flow is like poetry its just silky and elegant. Your writing as a whole is probably best put elegant, if I'm honest. It makes me smile how well you set the contrast between the two, the way you contrast their views towards each other and their contrast in thoughts to that night, yet the way you bring them together on certain aspects as the emotion gets thick. You convey emotion beautifully, really you do. More elegance, more glamour, more beauty even through all the pain, its admirable it really is. I think its the simplicity of everything that attracts me most; its all so simply done, yet with so much effect. Its simply beautiful.

I truly adore this - please do keep writing, I don't think I can ever bare to see this end now I've started (as late a start as it is), update soon yes? And I'll most definitely subscribe. Amazing job, you have gallons of talent. Don't let this story ever go, :)

You have a way with writing, it's gorgeous the way your describe things. I love the idea and I love how both Gerard and Rebecca are heartbroken over this and both have very different personalities that you can really see throughout the story.

The layout was wonderful, where did you get the background? I've seen it before, and liked it.
the picture is awesome, Gerard's so handsome :3

Great job! I love it!

I usually stay away from bandfics because I'm never too fond of them and practically 80% of the time - I have no idea who the hell the band is anyways. Luckily, I know MCR. XD

Anywho, I love the banner and the background you used for the story. They go really well together and don't distract the reader and provide a nice feeling to your story. Second, I love the length of the chapters. And lastly, I love how you wrote this. You manage to capture the moment(s) and what is going between Rebecca and Gerard and still make it interesting for the reader.

I think this was my favorite line from what I read - "My demons walk with me."

This is a lovely (and sad) story to read. Keep uu the good work. <3

i love this storie ( and don't judge my spelling :]) it's really good. I hope to see more updates? :]

i like this, very beautiful. can't wait for more *subscribes*

I definitely agree with stallion ducky; we are your number one fans! haha.

You are not "forever alone", because I have been here to comment on every single chapter just as they were posted. We are "forever alone" together. haha.

LOVED IT. <3

Oh, damn, girl. You be an updatin' fool. (:

I love how Gerard describes her. It's just so freaking cute. The definition of adorable. The true face of love. Seriously. You captured it all, in just a few short paragraphs. I don't know how you did it, but God, did you ever do it.

And I anxiously wait for the next chapter.
As does elisegeree. Because we're your number one fans! :D

I'm so excited! I'm so curious to see what happens.

The last few chapters have NOT been lame! They're wonderful!

I post on every chapter because (1) I have no life and (2) I love this story!!

For the two posters above, elisegeree and Emo_Bubblegum-xxx, this story is going to be exactly five more chapters after chapter 5 (not including the prologue). 11 parts in total. :) I'm really glad you like it so far though, and before next week is through I should be totally finished with the story!

*those

awesome story just hoping it won't be one of Rhodes short ones ;)

I'm reading!! I actually really hope this is more than a short story to be honest (:

i love this. it's so beautiful. i can't wait for the next update.