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  • Mr Reckless.

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    This is beautiful.
    I've been reduced to tears.
    I need to know what happens.
    <3
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    October 22nd, 2010 at 09:38pm
  • nissghoul

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    I absolutely love this! You're writing is fucking beautiful!

    Update soon<3
    October 21st, 2010 at 03:35pm
  • elisegeree

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    I enjoy this. And the banner :D
    I can't wait for more (:
    October 21st, 2010 at 05:43am
  • stallion ducky;

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    My creys. ):
    October 21st, 2010 at 02:58am
  • untitledusername

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    aww this is so depressing but so amazing at the same time. Please update soon? xx
    October 16th, 2010 at 01:33am
  • stallion ducky;

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    Her name was tattooed across my eyelids. She was all I saw. All I thought about. She was the world and then some.

    Oh, God, please. I can't even right now.
    I CAN'T EVEN, ANNIE.

    Something about that line made me just want to write a story.
    It's so perfect and gorgeous and beautiful. I don't even know. <3

    I like how you're switching point of views. And, believe it or not, I like how all the chapters are shorter. I think it formats the story correctly, and I don't know. It's not all information at one time. It's not like they're going through it anymore. It's the aftermath of Gerard's mistake.

    I like that. (:
    October 13th, 2010 at 10:26pm
  • elisegeree

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    So amazing! Can't wait for more!
    October 13th, 2010 at 06:36am
  • Gerard Arthur Way.

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    this is so lovely! you're so talented.
    October 13th, 2010 at 04:43am
  • stallion ducky;

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    I don't have any words to that first chapter. I honestly don't.

    I loved the ending, though. :3
    October 13th, 2010 at 03:35am
  • elisegeree

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    My lord, that was very well-written. You have amazing talent.
    October 12th, 2010 at 06:28am
  • elisegeree

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    Absolutely beautiful writing. I can't wait to see what comes of it. (:
    October 12th, 2010 at 04:08am